Ava Blue

@loopylin

OOoo I love the expressions!

@freedomwriter76

That’s okay. 🙂 We’ll miss them, but we’ll survive. *Sniff*

Although, villains? O.O

@queen_of_alvastia

Hi! Welcome to the little passage of insanity! There’s nowhere else in the Castle quite as… Um… Something. I’m sure there’s some great filament of uniqueness here.

@_delta-leigh_

Im not in AP music theory or anything  but I would say it looks pretty good I mean it follows a rhyme  scheme. If you want to critic a few songs here are a few from the world of Kharvia

 
Anim Traveling Song
Verse 1
Gather your lamp

grab your sword

through the warhlam

start us forward

leave now this place by which we used to l…[Read more]

@queen_of_alvastia

XD I think my Tauren might be a smidge better behaved lol

@lighoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76 @esther-c @keilah-h

Thanks you guys! 💗(●’◡’●)

And esther my mom and I are praying too, thanks for the reminder! And great verse too <3

@loopylin

Yes please, I’m always interested. I love the lopsided grin 😎😂

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @other-people-idk-im-tired

Some Dante sketches if anyone’s interested 

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 I know I’ve said this before, but I love y’all ‘s charries. Grimm and Riker are both so sweet…

This side plot with Riker and his lost son makes me want to bring in Edria and Amicai, since they would sympathize soooo much (since they lost their first two kids). But they’ve been dead for nearing eleven years now,…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Glad to be of service 😊😋

@whalekeeper

These are just ones that popped into my head. (He sounds like a really cool character!)

Bently

Brett

Buck (idk he just seems like a B name)

Ellen

Ummm that’s all I can think of. Hope it’s helpful

@freedomwriter76 *drags Torryn in* *sits down* *opens notebook* I feel like I should be here….

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 Yeah….and I did tell my dad my plot and he was like oh okay to the coma thingy XDXD But then at dinner he said, you could actually kill him yk.

Me: O_o I know.

@freedomwriter76 Who’s that guy on your pfp now? 🙂

@godlyfantasy12

Heyo, just listening in. I can tell you’re definitely going for the ‘Garden of Eden’ scenario, which is always cool to see in the classics, like Chronicles of Narnia. Essentially Riven is November’s snake (metaphorically of course), and that’s a great piece of symbolism. I was wondering, do you have someone in this backstory who…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I agree with Princesa and OtherworldlyHistorian, I don’t think your reader will feel cheated, particularly cause the character CHOSE to, and it sounds like that was the only way.

XD Even likeable characters must die. We’ll just be hurting more cause we like them…XD
But then that gives the reader a chance to sympathize with the…[Read more]

My friend said if he went in a coma he’d prob die again…..

@freedomwriter76 THAT’S FOUR VOTES FOR TORRYN’S LIFE!! Five if you count mine. And I just asked another friend so I’ll see if I can make it 6 <3333

IT’S A REALLY GOOD SUGGESTION! Y’all are helping me save Torryn’s lifel lolol

@godlyfantasy12 YESSSS!! Bc like it’s a society based on the Vikings so obv they don’t know about every medical condition out there….such as a coma. 🙂 I’m very happy rn 🙂

@gwyndalf-the-wise (Sorry I tagged you wrong the first time!)

ANOTHER VOTE FOR TORRYN!! *cheers*