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Loopy replied to the topic Does this dialogue (and ImPOrtAnT MomEnT) feel natural? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
That was so cool! I love the world building and the characters and everything! I was able to follow all of it pretty well. Are you going to post more?
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
I’m not really sure what to do, so, uh, here 😅
Cammie
Cammie watched from beside Milo as Crosshair turned sharply to Feather and spit out, “Are you seriously allowing him to-”
Feather stopped him with a whispered sentence and although he still seemed incredibly against going anywhere with the Colonel, he accepted it,…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The Character Ship Game Show✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
*Dante and Ellie walk together down the hall towards the backstage lounge.*
Ellie: How did you know the answers to those questions? It’s kinda… creepy.
Dante: Creepy? I just guessed blue because of the blue hoodie you constantly wear, and you have flinched pretty much every time I’ve accidentally brushed against your arm or something. I’m no…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6
“Now that that’s solved…does everyone want to get moving? We can decide which way to go while Crow over there makes his decision.”
Tauren smiles, turning towards Jaren. “You want to eat something?” he points over to the table, which still has plenty of food.
“Hey why don’t you guys come too, we can all sit…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The Character Ship Game Show✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 I likely won’t have time until Friday because I still don’t know what the next challenge will be. (I was thinking maybe doing a third wheel challenge? Not sure exactly what that would be, but it sounded fun to me)
If you don’t want to wait that long, though, you could figure out and start the next round yourself. I could still…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Btw are you working on a single draft rn? Or like all these scenes are from various book-hopping adventures XD?
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Oh ok that makes since. 😭😭yes not as much as Reuben,
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Does this dialogue (and ImPOrtAnT MomEnT) feel natural? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
That was really good!
Btw, you have a Tauren too?! XD the name jumped out to me in there of course
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Oh I see it’s a little safer if they stay?
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Poor boi! I love him so much! XD Is he not old enough to move out, or lacks the self confidence to do so? Because pls get him out of there 😭 and a guitar? Dude, instruments can hold so much sentimental value ;(
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Enid replied to the topic Does this dialogue (and ImPOrtAnT MomEnT) feel natural? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Holy toothy cow, that was long. Sorry.
Tagsies?
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @folith-feolin @thearcaneaxiom @esther-c @keilah-h @anyoneelsewannareadthismouthfulofasnippet?
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Enid started the topic Does this dialogue (and ImPOrtAnT MomEnT) feel natural? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Okay, so this section might be more than a little confusing – there’s a lot of context, and a lot of terms that would make sense to anyone reading previous chapters, but not to newcomers. All I want to know is, does it feel natural? Some of it probably won’t, since Farrlytes sometimes speak with flowery, poetic terms. But besides those, does it…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 6 months ago
Thanks so much! Yeah, I have no archery backround so I followed the reference with extra care XD
Thanks so much! Glad you like it! XD
XD thank you!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
I have no idea who anyyyy of those people are… XD but they look cool! I want that guys epic looking lego wings. Pls?
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 6 months ago
@mineralizedwritings That looks amazing, Min! I love how it looks like there is no line art and also you drew the hands really well. (And he’s actually holding the bow correctly which makes me unspeakably happy XD )
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Loopy replied to the topic feeling ashamed of your writing? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
I’ve never finished a book so I don’t know exactly what you’re experiencing, but maybe you just need a break?
If you’re reading something you wrote over and over, it’s bound to start sounding weird or bad. Kind of like when you repeat a word to yourself until it stops making sense.(Or maybe that’s just a weird thing only I do. idk.)
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12
Eddie
“Um…mine is green,”
Eddie nodded. “That’s nice.”
This is awkward. She thought. I feel like Ellie right now. Come on. Just ask him a question back! It’s not that hard.
But Eddie continued staring at her tail in her hands.
I never run out of words when Ellie’s with me…
Then s…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
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Enid replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Murder mystery? Some kind of mystery? Survival story?
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