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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
@loopylin @anyone
Moth
Warm, rich scents wafted up the grand staircase. Moth, who had chosen to exit his room and speak to people, found himself caught up in the crowd. Luggage was forgotten; groups dispersed and reappeared in different forms. All boys traveled towards the dining hall.
The dining hall’s carved walls reached the ceiling with…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Lucille
The tower’s door had a warped surface and a handle. Lucy tugged. When that didn’t work, she slipped both her arms through the handle and put her feet on the frame for leverage. She was young, but she was a warden’s daughter, and she would force this if her life depended on it.
Her arms whitened, fit to break from the press…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Of course! And I understand hating your own writing. I was looking at my old roleplays a bit ago and they hurt my brain.
Also, I really, really love your descriptions.
Thank you! I’ve been trying to describe things thoroughly even though it’s tedious at times. Cuz afterwards I’m glad to have done it.
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whaley replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
That is perhaps the most iconic side character focused entry I have seen in a roleplay. That was needed. I appreciate your thoughtful addition.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The mailbox! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
From: Flax, 21st Palace avenue Guest unit #5
To: Brea
Hi Brea, I’m most sorry for my late reply, I considered sending this letter and changed my mind many times as I wasn’t sure you wanted one in the first place. Well, I’ve always wanted a penpal so at most maybe this can make your brother pleased. Feel free to let me know if you…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
To my fellow roleplayers, I am sick today and need a break from KP. Will update some threads when I feel better!
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Why did you choose to write about your main character? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 months ago

Ryla became the first MC for my current WIP because I was fiddling around with some tiny ducks and arranged them into a scene in which they were in a circle surrounding one laying on a flat rock, and another wearing an eraser cap on his head about to kill her with a tack. I immediately wanted to know what was going through the mind of the poor…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
I haven’t been watching it, but I think after the book they managed to revive him. He’s my favorite character and I don’t want him permanently dead. 🙁
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
All hail the best Thanksgiving food! I assume your family makes the sauce?
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
@loopylin @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon
Awesome! I’ll put Celarent and Ryla in tomorrow. Should I just pick teams for them?
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
@anyonewaitingformetoroleplay
I might ghost you for a couple days because reasons. Sorry in advance. I won’t be gone forever.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The mailbox! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
To: Mellissa Thompson, my secret hideout, the In Between place
From: Angelita, 4647 Flambert Lane, Dingyville, Maryland, The United States
Dear Mel,
That pool sounds scary. What is an inbetween place? How do you get to one? Were there frogs at that weird indoor pool? Frogs are way less gross than boys. FROGS don’t leave their u…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Why did you choose to write about your main character? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 months ago
Oh, fabulous question!
Let’s see.
In Heirs of Ashes Alyona was originally the MC, but I ended up changing the sibling’s age order and put Viktor in her place. Then he kinda became his own person. It’s funny reading back to some of those old RPs with him. I mentioned his scarring and trauma in almost every post because I had just…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Lucille
Lucy did not run without the Protector. She grabbed his arm and yanked him forward, pointing. “No – Th-that way!”
The tower had an opening at the base – a scuffed metal lid. She hadn’t noticed it before and now it was far from them both. But the crows’ shadows grew around them and the Protector surely couldn’t fight them off. He…[Read more]
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whaley started the topic Why did you choose to write about your main character? in the forum Topic of the Week 5 months ago
Why did you choose to write about your main character?
This is as complicated as it sounds! Characters are multi-faceted and ever-changing, so when faced with this question, it might be hard to answer. Do you write about them because you relate to them, carry a message through them, or simply enjoy their unique existence? It’s different for…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Topic of the Week…? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
I have never felt so called out
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
It’s painful to read, but thanks I guess.
It’s not painful to read. You describe things clearly, there are varied sentence lengths, and you suggest emotion at sprinkled points through the sections. You also don’t harp on descriptions, which is something I struggle with.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Lol. Yeah, I can see that. Scratch PK and put in “military brat.” In the book cannon he’s a farm kid, but it’s an ancient world where everyone fights sometimes, and ballads are some of the only literature he has read. Reúven is even more military minded.
It would be funny to compare their different views of war, heroism, and military.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months ago
Aw man… If it’s any consolation to you, I enjoy reading your rps! You’re doing a great job and if you’re frustrated with something, whatever it is, usually that means you’re getting better.
Lucille
Lucy tumbled over the crow’s back and landed on the ground. The crow’s focus shifted and it instantly chose to stride toward her.
There w…[Read more]
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