Ava Blue

@liberty

*Squeals*

Yay! Like I said, it’s such an intricately pieced world.

Yeah, most of mine are in my head too.

@ellette-giselle

Exactly! =)

@liberty

Oh, I liked your story. The worldbuilding and premise was so unique! And the frame story layout was a good touch. Does it belong to a larger story?

@ellette-giselle

Very true. It’s so much fun. XD I would add that we hope if we can connect to a reader’s heart, we can impact them in the long run.

@ellette-giselle

Aw, thanks! (Why is it so fulfilling to hear your writing made someone cry? XD)

@the_lost-journal

Glad to see you’re alive. I was kind of concerned. 😂

@ellette-giselle

Oh, interesting! I love the Celtic folklore inspiration. Fairies are so creepy. XD It’s a fascinating premise.

@rae

Here it is in all it’s ESL by a native English speaker glory.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1v4ZJMMpmLEv0rVVsb7mpQG6OI0Xt1XpeWYZU5_934nc/edit?usp=drivesdk

@rae

Yay! I’ll run over mine to get some edits my siblings suggested done and send it in after that.

@rae Expect mine to be posted at the literal last minute. I have a lot to do today and I can’t get this done right away. 😅

@hybridlore @jonas @whalekeeper @rae @raxforge @grcr @ellette-giselle

Felicity- Group 1, Elderstrand

“What are these things?”

Felicity furrowed her brow. “I thought at first they might be clickmen, but they’re silent, no machinery. But they aren’t ink animated, either, probably, because there was something inside. They definitely aren’t peopl…[Read more]

“Sleep deprived authors are one of my worst nightmares.”- my brother

@ellette-giselle

My brother “I find so much satisfaction in forceful hand clapping. It satisfies my satisfactions needs”

Lol, sounds like one of my sisters.

@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge

Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)

Marcel stumbled over to Sara and Felicity to fetch his staff. He held it in the crook of his bad arm and punched their shoulders with his other hand. “Nice job.”

They shared smiles for a split second. Marcel ran back into the fray. His hand…[Read more]

@jonas @whalekeeper 👍

*2 and 1/2 down

@jonas

I think Marcel’s is dead; either we can say the feathers muffled it to death, or tearing off the iron kills the ironwalker because its body is sealed to the armor. This sounds rather morbid, now that I write it.

@hybridlore

Felicity- Group 1, Edge of Elderstrand 

Felicity got shakily to her feet.

“Yep. Didn’t feel-” she stumbled suddenly, and Sara caught her.

“… a thing,” she finished. Her eyes were half glazed over, but she was still scanning the nearby area, ready to throw herself at any threat that came close.

“You okay?” she asked, trying to deflect.

@jonas ok cool thx