Ava Blue

@rae

Ooh, this looks fun! Do we just post our stories into this topic?

that (your short story with a title longer than it) was hilarious!! 🤣 😭 And incredibly relatable! I’m very curious about Mrs. Tammany and the grandmother with a black belt in karate

Thank you! The grandmother happens to be a spy. 😁

@theloonyone

My notification was lost in a mountain of emails after our trip.
I think I prefer the Broadway version. I just love live performances, and the tap dancing is really cool.

@esther-c

Ahh, ok. I can’t wait to meet Hallie’s boy! And I totally forgot Tyler was the one who would die until I read Sara’s comment, and now I’m sad. 😭😭 He’s so nice!

@esther-c @smiley

I write scenes in my head at night too! Sometimes I get great ideas, and then suddenly I’m too excited to sleep.😆

@savannah_grace2009

I do all of those too. Especially the comebacks I should have said to jerks and didn’t. And then I make up conversations in which I can say them, which is rather weird, since I really don…[Read more]

*sobs* Whyyyyyyyyyyyy

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@koshka Your characters seem really fun! I also have a character who’s working as a repairman/ cleaner so maybe they might end up working together

@freed_and_redeemed

I wanted Invisalign, but apparently my mouth isn’t big enough for all of my teeth to even fit in my head, so I’ll probably have to get braces and spacers 😅 I meannn, I had a dentist tell me that the molars that were supposed to come in when I was 12 never came in bc there isn’t enough room in my mouth 🤷🏻‍♀️

seriously thoug…

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@koshka

I’m totally good with it 🥰 Good to see you around again

@theshadow

You should!! It’s called Billy Joe McGuffrey Theatrical version.

@esther-c

Thanks! It’s from my dad’s dad joke book.

@whalekeeper

Ugh, braces are the worst. 😖

@theducktator @koshka @keilah-h

Brace adjustments XDXD They put in these rubber bands two days ago and now I can’t chew.

Okay, keep in mind most of these are optional! I’ll make sure to note which ones are grammatically necessary, and you can assume anything else is just to give the reader’s eye a rest where it is the most logical.

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CHAPTER 1-LAXAN INVASION

!0,015 GA. The city of Laxan on the planet Laxor…

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@theshadow

Alas, we don’t have the dvd. Maybe I’ll get it from the library. Have you ever listened to the full length Billy Joe McGuffrey?

@rae

All your replies are noted ;P

I saw somewhere that you have trouble with paragraph breaks. I love sequencing sentences, especially dialogue sentences, so I’ll give you some suggestions here in just a sec.

@whalekeeper

You have never known true pain and dedication, unless you have been forced to eat bacon with your front teeth only.

But why???????

Sorry, but I have to let out my feelings somewhere

You have never known true pain and dedication, unless you have been forced to eat bacon with your front teeth only.