Ava Blue

@raxforge

I do!! Oh, you are sarcastic? XD

This looks like a good start, I love pyro stories!

It helps to think of the key problems in the story. They are the “why” of the conflict, the reasons for the plot to exist. Characters can disagree and want different things. Sometimes a story introduces a question, and each character has a different…[Read more]

@RAXFORGE

I LOVE HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@keilah-h

Sorry for abandoning this. School’s been crazy, and now I’m sick. I’ll try to RP later today. 🙂

@jonas

Winnifred

Win stifled a scream with her hand and stumbled back a few paces as the statue moved towards her and started speaking. Watson spooked and darted behind her legs.

After a moment of shock, she took her hand off her mouth.

“I- I don’t know. Just appeared… Wha- Who are you?”

Watson’s tail brushed against her leg.

“Do you hear…[Read more]

@beth-torres

Felicity

“Hello, hall walker!” Felicity greeted her fellow student with a grin. “Nice hat.”

Lois finished climbing in behind her, the ink vine retracting back into his hand.

@hybridlore @ellette-giselle

I’m so glad y’all are enjoying this! Your encouragement helps us keep it up. So far it’s plotted out to last us well nigh New Year’s.

I do have bad tidings though. We are entering “IsitreallyfinallsweekalreadywhydidweenrollineightweekclassescanyoudieofessaysIthoughtIhadstudiedIdon’trememberanythinganymore.” A…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Oh, it sounds fascinating so far! I like your characters and the world is intriguing. I’ll wait to add critiques untill I understand you story more. 🙂

(By the by, I only have 16 pages for my “main” WIP, and all but four is just me getting distracted by the various backstories. But let’s not despise the day of small things. [Zec 4:10])

@raxforge

What about homeschoolers who only do a third of the work and still know everything in class?😎😂 chronic procrastinator here

@raxforge

😂 I’ll add those in.

I recently got the first stripe on my white belt.

@the_lost-journal

People have added teachers! Many of them are meant to be used by anyone, but there are a few (? at least one) that belong to certain writers. I’ve thought about doing the same thing.

@ellette-giselle @koshka

Marcel

“So… They went for me, because they want him, because they want his brother, because they want you. What’s your name?”

“Rory.”

Marcel thought on this for a second. He took Rory’s hand and swung it up and down, an exhausted shake. “Nice to meet you.”

@koshka

*dissolves into a jumble of joy bubbles*

It’s the little Natan boy! Awwwww.

Another great example on how to make a character sympathetic, despite being “cold as the alps.” XD

Also one of the worst heartbreaks I’ve had over a character. Thank you for reminding me.

*sniff*

@linus-smallprint

WHY ALL THE DAD JOKES?????

@rae

I stalk this page and I love your art.

@loopylin

I love that soooo much!

@ellette-giselle @koshka

Yep

Marcel

“Sure I do.”

“What happened?”

“A bunch of guys started stalking the kid. Didn’t like that.” Marcel paused to hiss through his teeth, and lightly relaxed his wings. “I would have stuck with normal street fighting, but they kept coming so I had to improvise.”

@koshka @ellette-giselle

I did not intend for my character to get this hurt. 😂 I anticipate he will be very chill about the whole thing and probably skip hospital. Even if that’s a poor decision.

Marcel

Voices rose and moved. Marcel opened his eyes; the fuzzy light of an electric bulb hung over the couch he lay on. He didn’t have the best…[Read more]

@jonas

Watson

Winnifred had decided that this was a dream, and so she had finally felt comfortable leaving the room in the tower which they had first found themselves in. Watson, whose dreams mainly consisted of memories him chasing birds and mice in his past lives, very much doubted Win’s theory. He kept this to himself, though.

They descended…[Read more]

@rae

If you feel like you’re not learning, you might be drawing too much of the same thing and burning your energy out looking at it. I do that aaaallllll the time. Maybe you’re drawing character faces too often, and now you are sick of the style. Or you’ve practiced something to the point where you can’t tell what looks good anymore.

Draw new…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Don’t look at me, Marcel is unconscious. (I’m waiting for Koshka :P)

@the_lost-journal

Hello! Your character seems cute! If you want, I have a couple characters up in one of the tower rooms that she could meet.

We kinda have a different than usual format for role plays here. We write as we normally would if we were writing our books. That might look different for different people, but typically it’s past tense/…[Read more]

@jonas

Hi I just added a couple new characters on the last page and the page before, if you still want someone to meet your character. Do you have a description for Izre?

@beth-torres Here’s some quick descriptions

Felicity Frost: 16 I think, female, very tall, pale skin, long white hair in a braid, silver eyes, plain clothes, barefoot

Lois Thorne: 17, male, comfortable fall clothes, black curly hair, glasses, pen drawings all over his arms and back on his hands that could be mistaken for tattoos