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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
You and me both girl XD isn’t the point of writing to do something different?
Yesss! Atoh is my priority but I really enjoy my other one.
Yeah, it’s rough. Well, maybe I can help you see another perspective on your mom. I know her chronic illness is different than mine, but depression is common to a lot of chronic illnesses.
One…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
RAE!!! I caaaaaaaan’t share this!! Secrets keep me going! Plus it wouldn’t read understandably without context. Nevertheless, thank you for the support LOL XDXD
I started a new short story about Tomoko Tadashi Tama (I think that’s what his full name is gonna be, still on fence) but I just discovered that the name Tomoko is supposed to be a g…
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
And it being an unconventional one is the best 😜
Exactly! 🤪 Thx for responding to my little ramble 😚
Honestly prob gonna take a short break from editing bc as much as I love them, I need a break from Leon and Riker XD
and idk it’s a little more difficult when editing, bc I’m reading over things I’ve already written and rewri…
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Making something unique yet consistent is really important to me. But so hard to pull off XD
I like having two different ones to rotate between, it keeps me from getting bored lol. Thanks! I’m glad you’re interested in it. Honestly for so long ATOH was like my special project but now I’m not sure which one means more to me.…
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Question Regarding Fantasy Books in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 month, 3 weeks ago
I agree with you about Harry Potter. Another thing is that the characters weren’t exactly learning magic. They were learning how to use their abilities. Magic is genetic, not a way to get into the occult or a fantasy equivalent.
Probably have him explain the difference between these and other books with magic, t…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Question Regarding Fantasy Books in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 month, 3 weeks ago
To be clear, I’m not attacking Keilah, I’m just generally defending the use of magic in these generally avoided series.
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whaley replied to the topic Question Regarding Fantasy Books in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 month, 3 weeks ago
A fantasy book telling the reader not to read fantasy books would be hypocritical.
I think a lot of this can be simplified through common sense. Were these books meant to be imitated? Were they portraying real sorcery positively, or just using for an obviously fantastical story? If Alan (or even better, his parents, since he was young and easily…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Awww yess I made you melt! Or well, Tauren probably did XD
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Thank you!
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @keilah-h @theshadow @esther-c @freed_and_redeemed @grcr
I might add someone else later, but for now I’m just doing one.
Ayla (I haven’t given her a last name yet)
Age: 15
Species: Human
Appearance: Ayla is 5′ 7”, with pale skin, thick wavy dark brown hair, dark brown eyes, and high cheekbones. She is slender, and typically…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
That sounds really cool! Yeah, I think I tend to plot the most for the climax and not do as much for the rest. XD
I feel like a ending that depends on the rest of the story is the best. Anyone can make a generic ending, but having one like that makes it more special.
Y’know it doesn’t feel too alien even though it’s really…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Yeah, thanks!! I hope it stands up to my claims when I write it! 😝
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Really?? That’s so cool! I can’t imagine how that must feel.
It’s a weird feeling, but it’s not distracting me from the rest of the project. I know a lot of people have their ending planned out, but get over-obsessed and never plan how to get there XDXD But this ending literally depends on how the rest of the story plays o…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Really?? That’s so cool! I can’t imagine how that must feel.
I’ve been thinking about my secondary project (Our last Hope) for a bit now and I’ve almost completely gotten the beginning figured out. I’m actually finding that writing a tight plot is easier than a loose slice of life style (My story with Tauren). There are distinct…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @rae @freed_and_redeemed @anyone
I am so happy right now guys 👀 I found the perfect ending to my project. Like, I just can’t right now. And I won’t say what it is because the joy is in the foreshadowed surprise, but aagh – and it came from my plot board!! All I had to do was look at what was s…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
How do you guys want to start this? Maybe the new characters want to secure their own areas in the castle? I’m not sure what kind of conflicts have popped up before this. XD
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
You know what? Fine, here goes nothing XD I need a distraction from senioritis.
Commissioner Barnes (Only gives her first name to friends)
Age: 35
Species/ethnicity: Staunchly human; from an isolated city in an alternative sci-fi Earth. If she was from normal Earth, she would be German. (I did not pick her because of this, I promise…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic What is the cringiest thing you've ever written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
I guess Natalie’s not good at stabbing?😂 And since he’s a real person, my mom wouldn’t let me kill him.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic What is the cringiest thing you've ever written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Here’s a scene from the end of Chapter 1:
The ducks flew off to meet the rebellion. First they dropped glitter bombs, before flying down. The rebels fled at the onslaught of glitter, all except for The Dope, who attacked Natalie. However, she was ready for him. She flew just out of his reach, darting down and stabbing…
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
I’ve been very busy the past few weeks. Sorry it took me so long to show up here. *hands you spinach ice cream* Anyway, I started your story, and I’m really enjoying it!
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