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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Those were really fun to read! I love your writing style and I’m really curious about these characters’ stories now.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
Ah! That makes sense. It’s a fascinating occupation. 🙂
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Jaybird replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
Ah, yes, that gives me several ideas, especially for the plot structure. Thank you for sharing!
I think I’m going to like all your charries. Beric’s board is lovely. Are they all blacksmiths?
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Jaybird replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @hybridlore @theducktator @anyoneinterestedinRangers
It’s been a week. Did the two sometimes-forgetful Scribblers write another scene?
YES!
In Which the Band Gets Interrogated, and Storytime Makes a Comeback
Chapter 8
The corridor beyond was just like I had imagined it. Stone walls curved around us in a…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
For some reason your notifs didn’t work the first time. This looks interesting! Is there a way to comment on it?
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Ellie always gets it
Woww Celarent.. 🤣 Looks like you disapprove of change.
Even the teacher was in a tree.
I think my brain needs rewiring. Reading this, I immediately pictured Barnes as a stuck cat. With sophisticated cat clothes and everything.
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Your style is so smooth and descriptive. 😊
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
What’s wrong with Alistair? Alaric is better though.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Celarent
Celarent had no idea what a field day was, but apparently it meant no school. Even the teacher was in a tree. He sighed. He’d looked forward to this class and it had been canceled in favor of letting a bunch of delinquents run wild. Only an entire month had been spent forging official documents so that he could…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@whalekeeper
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@kathleenramm @reaganramm @whoever’s-in-charge-now
Look several posts up. KP’s been taking forever to load and keeps giving error messages. -
Jaybird replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Yay! It worked. I realize now that the last bit was a touch scrambled. It should read like this:
The little boy Laiba was carrying struggled to get down. The moment his feet touched the tent floor he trundled off to join his siblings. Laiba smiled faintly.
“They are precious.” Alyona whispered politely, her heart twisting inside her. The girl…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
And a bit from Book 2!
“Welcome, husband.” The woman by the fire stood up. She was beautiful in her own way. Her eyes were a honey gold and glowed with a quiet excitement. The hair that she brushed back under her hood was dark as night. Alyona thought she might be a few years younger than Clehan. A small child was perched on her hip, his head res…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
I am too suspicious about this connection to try to open another thread to do this… I think this is the right spot though.
@godlyfantasy12 @whalekeeper @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @ellette-giselle @loopylin @anyone-who-wants
I have picked up writing in my WIP a bit more the past week, although it’s a bit out of chronological order. I just…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
I made it! I’ve been trying to get on all day. Had it “opening” during work which was slow today.
But I have made it. *gasp for breath*
Koshka and I are working on homework, so we’ll be on and off… As much as Wyoh lets us in.
*glares at Wyoh*
Be nice! I wrote some scenes I want to share for critiques.
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
It’s barely working on my end. @godlyfantasy12 I’m sorry for responding an hour late because that’s how long it took to get in.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
First time I’ve ever had to rewrite an rp. Stupid glitches.
@whalekeeper @raxforge @koshka
Ellie
For a long moment, Ellie stood still, staring at the teacher as her classmates talked and played behind her. Eventually, the teacher turned her expressionless mask towards Ellie. Her tail twitched. Then something connected in her brain and she…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
I love her.
Thanks XD I felt like we needed at least one secretly kind adult on this rp.
I hope the problems straighten out soon. I saw Reagan Ramm visited last week.
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
My internet connection with this website is abhorrent. It took ten minutes to just load into the main page. Wyoh, if thou watchest over me, go haunt someone else.
Barnes
“Hey, Miss Teacher?” One of the smallest girls asked. “Why did we leave the classroom?”
Barnes, meanwhile, was setting up her file cabinet under a…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Anyone else having a problem with KP taking like a full minute to load each new page you try to open? I also keep encountering random error codes and times when KP just refuses to open for a couple hours.
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