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The Ducktator replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 weeks, 1 day ago
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 weeks, 1 day ago
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 weeks, 1 day ago
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Okay Shadow, I’m not going to move after this until you’re good to go. 🙂
Barnes
“Good,” she replied to Tenz.
Hugo began to stir. He stretched, and sat up, casually tracing the hearth with the tip of his foot. He reminded Barnes of a stray cat who used to haunt her front porch – grateful for the warmth, but undeniably exploiting…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic short scene! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Good choice.
Awesome, thank you! *Sees the cookie box is already empty* *Refills it with caramel popcorn*
It’s difficult to make this scene clear, because it is confusing from the character’s perspective. He is supposed to not know why this is happening. So… yeah. XD
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
@koshka @ellette-giselle and maybe? @raxforge
I’m confused, are we still in the basement or is something happening?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Yay! So glad you like it!
Yeah, that would be a problem. As long as they believed you, pulling the author card might be the best defense.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
@koshka @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @keilah-h
And here’s Monday’s installment!
In Which Dwogin Will Not Be Outdone, and Aenwest Meets The Abyss (Nearly)
Chapter 4
It was amazing what three days of hard travel could do to a landscape . Gone were the deep woods full of mushrooms and squirrels. We had passed up into broken foothills where the…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 weeks, 2 days ago
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 weeks, 2 days ago
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 weeks, 2 days ago
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 weeks, 2 days ago
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 3 weeks, 2 days ago
I’m not an artist. I’m just a stalker.😂 I think @highscribeofaetherium is in this though.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Does this sign describe KP or what?
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 2 days ago
Oh yes, and happy Canadian Thanksgiving to all of you!
Thanks! Happy Columbus Day! (Do they celebrate that in Canada?)
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whaley replied to the topic short scene! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 weeks, 2 days ago
@loopylin @rae @freed_and_redeemed
Awesome, thank you all <3
Barnes “disappeared” but she’s actually close by, getting something to cheer him up. Probably a bag of baseballs.
For someone that hasn’t been through that, I will be honest in saying that it took me a moment or two to kinda figure out what was going on
Good to know. Since I was just w…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic short scene! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 weeks, 2 days ago
A Seb scene and a cookie in one post?? You spoil me.
*nibbles on cookie while reading*
Your writing is so good. Sorry if you were looking for criticism but I can’t think of much. I’m not really sure what happened to Barnes? I’m thinking maybe Seb was stuck for a lot longer than he thought so she left at some point?
Anyway, I’ve…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic short scene! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 weeks, 2 days ago
oh right, tags.
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed @rae @honestlyidontknowwhowantstoseethis
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whaley started the topic short scene! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 weeks, 2 days ago
I would love feedback on this scene!
Warning, a scene of a character getting very overwhelmed to the point of panic.
– Here it is –
The ball flew across the empty baseball field, and landed with a puff of dust.
“Wahoo!” Sebastian leaped, and pumped his fist in the air. His curls gleamed, bouncing over his dull navy jacket. “Take that, d…[Read more]
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Loopy posted an update 3 weeks, 2 days ago
@whalekeeper Hello, you’re awake. I locked myself out of both my car and my apartment so I’m sitting in the trunk of my dad’s pickup with nothing to do until my parents get home lol. Wanna chat?
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Oh my goodness I didn’t see you, hiiiiiiiiii
You didn’t get kidnapped by a random stranger, did you?
Pleeze survive, i don’t want natural selection to get you
I need to sleep now, but thx for wanting to talk anyway <3
I survived, thanks for worrying XD My parents finally arrived.
Yay 😁
Good night! <3