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The Ducktator replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 weeks, 3 days ago
We’re okay now. The tornado ended up north of us, thankfully. I’ve never been tornadoed and I’d like to keep it that way. XD
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Biblical gender identity because that’s the world we live in.
I would say keep any gender issues out of MG. I was reading MG at 7ish, and my parents never told me about any of that stuff until I was a teen. Finding out about it, even from a Biblical perspective, would have traumatized tiny me.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 weeks, 3 days ago
I see a huge difference in the spiritual maturity of the homeschoolers vs. the public schoolers.
Seriously. My sister has a Christian friend about her age who’s public schooled, and my sister, who is NEVER someone I’d consider mature, seems more mature next to this friend. The friend is 9 and she’s already dating for one thing, and s…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 weeks, 3 days ago
I love MG! That’s the age range I read most! I would assume this novel would be contemporary too?
What did/do you enjoy about your favorite MG novels?
Kids were allowed to be kids and have fun adventures outdoors, with minimal parental supervision. The MCs were independent, intelligent, and realistic. They’re more relatable than YA,…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 weeks, 3 days ago
We are in our basement right now under a tornado warning. Prayers would be appreciated.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 weeks, 3 days ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Also, there’s a difference between the Chosen One trope and a For Such a Time mentality. I would love to see the true value of humanity, of the reader, addressed. That we are made with purpose and by intention. There is hope. God doesn’t waste His time making and loving children just to destroy them in Hell. This is why we cannot decide to be a…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 weeks, 3 days ago
-What did/do you enjoy about your favorite MG novels?
Humor. Slapstick sparingly and good wit whenever it’s needed.
I liked characters I could connect to (although considering my personality, I could empathize easily) I liked it when the suffering was real. Kids can be done of the most melodramatic people on the planet, but like Koshka said,…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Felicity
“…Yeah, like a sunset, I guess.” As she looked at Chase, her momentary wave of frustration faded away. She smiled.
“So, what’s your next class? Mine’s science. I’m still deciding if I want to go or skip and risk Lois’ disappointment.”
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
No actual killing please
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whaley replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 weeks, 4 days ago
– What did/do you enjoy about your favorite MG novels?
Mm, probably the general sense of wholesomeness. The stories weren’t deep by YA standards, as YA tends to be emotional and brooding. But the MG novels I enjoyed had, rather, a sense of appreciation for the good things in a kid’s life. And even if bad things were happening to the p…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
I don’t know. XD Maybe because I’m KP’s friendly neighborhood psychic.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
No other metroidvania will be able to compete except the og Hollow Knight
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
SILKSONG!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤡💀✨❤️
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
That’s perfect! I love it.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
In Which Trees are Dangerous, and Aenwest Considers Doubles
Chapter 7
The closer we got to the Dell, the more tangled the trees became. It should have been much like the woods around Multnomah Falls, WA, but years ago, as I told Dwogin when he tripped over an exposed root, the Rangers had planted saplings between the older trees and woven them…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @hybridlore @theducktator @anyoneinterested
Some days we kinda forget,
Some WIPS will never go on.
Gotta get the rest of it done,
All the way to the Silver Star.
(Far away, through writer’s block so bold.)
*cough cough*
Although it’s been neglected, it has not been abandoned. We have another chapter!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Help on writing an impactful last day in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Like the others said, that depends on your characters. (They had some great advice.)
I think it would also depend on how expected/tragic the death was. While doesn’t necessarily lessen grief, it makes a lot of difference in how one processes it. (I think. Not an expert.) In some ways it would be worse, especially if they were…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Cute wrinkly noses. 🙃
I think Ellie is the right kind of person to have around when I’m cooking, loll. I make great food, but always leave the stove on.
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whaley replied to the topic Help on writing an impactful last day in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Children (under 10 maybe?) usually know that death exists, but aren’t very afraid of it because they don’t understand.
I’d move that down to 7 or 8 – when it comes to not understanding death at all.
My 9-year-old sister has responded to death with some solid understanding of its impact. Last Sunday, she was being difficult about som…[Read more]
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