Ava Blue

Our vacuum broke, so now it sucks and does not suck at the same time, thereby creating the paradox of Schrödinger’s Vaccum.

@whalekeeper

Poor Lucille. 😭 I like Dali. Please don’t kill him.

@elishavet-pidyon Wait now I’m really curious what the original rp was

@whalekeeper

Just opened this thread to read this:

“Well… I respect it because it’s a god, but I don’t have to like it. And it tries not to like me either because that would go against its morals. It doesn’t just talk, it preaches.”

😂 I have no words. Just goofy, suppressed laughter noises. XD Qhivzim sounds like my sister’s cat if they only l…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @loopylin

I am still sorely tempted to have my quiet guy haul off on someone. This is bad. His character development is at stake.

Viktor

“Any good? At science?” Viktor lifted one shoulder in a half shrug. “Ja, I guess so. I can remember things, I just…”

The pencil he had pulled back out waved aimlessly about as he searched for…[Read more]

@whalekeeper Ehhhhh. Needlessss… *shudder* 😉 I hope it well well!

@loopylin

Wow. I just wrote an RP and it got completely out of hand. I haven’t had Viktor yelling at anyone in a while, but I just found a trigger. XD It’s a bit excessive for the moment though, so I’ll edit to what I was originally intending before I send it in.

His poor…[Read more]

@loopylin

1. Thank you Madam Lin the Loopy-Minded, I shall always welcome your feedback.

2. Very good. Take the time you need.

3. Good. >:)

@loopylin @elishavet-pidyon

I’ll throw him in with the boys after I sort things out, read up to this point. I’m leaving for the doctor’s and my mind is occupied with needles.

@jonas It worked!

Finally decided what story to do and filled out the form 👍

@whalekeeper If you do want to write for Hugo, he could be Felicity’s lab partner if you want, or maybe there’s an odd number of people in the class and so the teacher has all three boys work together or something

@loopylin

And that is a question I had to scroll pretty far back to answer.

Do we wait for Hugo, @whakekeeper ?

@whalekeeper

1. As always, I absolutely love reading your writing. Thanks for sharing <3

2. There will be more Fel and Lo scenes eventually. I’m currently struggling with coming up with a villain and filling out the main plot.

3. Your current signature is diabolical and not appreciated.

@elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper
Lois

Lois slipped the note into his pocket and looked around the classroom. Most of his classmates faces were unfamiliar. He didn’t have much energy at the moment to introduce himself to someone new, and pairing up with Felicity was an almost guaranteed bad grade.

Viktor shifted uneasily in his seat next to Lois.…[Read more]

@koshka

*Does a little dance* Descriptions are sometimes the bane of my existence because you never know if they’re coming across.

And I promise bullying isn’t the majority of Lucille’s childhood experience. There are actually so many things I want to write about for her, and many things are more cheerful and interesting.

@elishavet-pidyon

She’s my favorite, may I have mercy on her soul. XD

I think I like her dad. Is he Dali?

Yes, he’s Dali. I call Lucille’s mum by her name as well. It feels more humanizing to call him that in this story rather than calling him ‘her dad’ or Dad.

I also found her description of her hair fascinating. Is it just metaphor, or does it…

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@loopylin

AHa! That works… I lost my place too…

Now let’s see if I can get back into my charrie’s head.

Viktor

Lab partners. Right.

Viktor shuffled his notes into his textbook as slowly as he could, making sure each page was smooth and even. His old habit to duck his head out of friendships cut again. A quick glance at Lois didn’t help.…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Aw, Lucille… I like Lucille.

I think I like her dad. Is he Dali?

I also found her description of her hair fascinating. Is it just metaphor, or does it have an important part in the plot/worldbuilding?

Those other kids are bullies. 😠 The struggle of wills in the fight was really good though. I liked how you focus on her not throwi…[Read more]