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The Ducktator posted an update 6 hours, 59 minutes ago
WE GOT SNOW!!!!!!!!!!! Not enough to go sledding or anything, but it’s pretty.
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 hours, 11 minutes ago
That’s a pretty good addition to the scene! I don’t think that deviated from your story’s voice at all.
You’ll see. Then you will understand why other readers are mad at him. It wasn’t pretty.
Hehe, okay.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 hours, 35 minutes ago
Whaley asked the original question. XD
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 hours, 41 minutes ago
even if it is his fault she was captured in the first place.
How did that happen exactly? Was it more of an ignorant blunder, or?
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 hours, 43 minutes ago
Thank you. If you weren’t playing the advocate, would you take Ellette’s side?
I simply mean what I described. 👍 I’m not sure how it compares with the rest of your feedback discussions… I have very little context. XD
He he.
My mind reading powers are impeccable.
Thanks for the link by the way! I can’t guarantee I’ll read it…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 9 hours, 4 minutes ago
My brother is in Challenge 2, I am the frazzled senior trying to help him learn logic, debate, and Latin. 🙃
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 hours, 8 minutes ago
Well, to be honest, I don’t know a lot of pree-teens who like to play dress-up and repeat whatever their sister tells them to say.
Good point. XD My siblings are a lot more willing to do stuff, but these are kids between the ages of 8 and 13. They still like to play “wolf fight” and “Indians.”
The funniest thing is, my most r…
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 hours, 22 minutes ago
Sadly, my biggest two never got filmed because that was the year all my guy actors were done dressing up and repeating lines. lol.
They were too cool for school, huh? XD
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 hours, 45 minutes ago
Do you guys want to try joining up with another small group?
Aw, Barnes is trying to be the comforting grandmother to everyone!
*Gasp* How dare you, she isn’t even forty yet! 😂 I get what you mean. Honestly she would be a pretty grumpy grandma. The grandma who complains about kids but gives them cookies all the…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 22 hours, 38 minutes ago
I am the asker, lol. I’m just gauging interest in using a screenwriting format. 😛
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 23 hours, 6 minutes ago
Oh, wait.
I’ve written a script for a small adaptation of Taming of the Shrew, does that count?
This question? I think it counts…
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 23 hours, 7 minutes ago
I’m sorry, what question? I’m kind of behind on replies here on account of school.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 23 hours, 16 minutes ago
For fun or for school?
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 1 day ago
Thanks! We probably will watch the BBC version. It’s Challenge 2 homework for me as well.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day ago
Has anyone tried writing a screenplay? Or wants to?
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 1 hour ago
Sometimes I can give a kid an ‘adult’ responsibility and they snap out of crying. I don’t know if that would work here, Rae, but she’s trying. XD
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 1 hour ago
Yay! I was wondering when we would figure out what happened to Martha. I hope Eric gets captured though.
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 1 hour ago
Barnes
“I was thinking we start down this corridor along the edge of the castle, and scour the place for clues and people,” Barnes told Percival.
The group waited a few minutes for Reid to calm his brother, who remained stubbornly curled up. He was still agitated.
Barnes was used to people who looked much younger than their…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 1 hour ago
Of course you can do whatever you want, I’m playing the other side’s advocate so you have balanced reasons for whatever you do.
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