Kingdom Pen | Autumnlily | Mentions https://kingdompen.org/members/autumnlily/activity/mentions/ Activity feed mentioning Autumnlily. Wed, 22 Apr 2026 18:47:41 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en-US 30 hourly 2 84a6a8771deaf8abc9ea163303a58e0e RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-chat-chat/page/334/#post-174296 Fri, 26 Jan 2024 17:17:04 -0500 @jonas @freedomwriter76 @highscribeofaetherum @trailblazer @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @princesachronicle22 @grcr @smiley @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @power @thearcaneaxiom @esther-c @scoutfinch180 @livingwoodchronicles @beth-torres @hybridlore @evelyn-collins I know we haven’t met, but I’m tagging you anyways…[Read more]

]]> a34dd6180b1485c6f0ca50ebba2e9d0d MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I'm beginning a novel....thoughts? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/im-beginning-a-novel-thoughts/#post-173446 Thu, 18 Jan 2024 00:04:57 -0500 @autumnlily

I take it you’re looking for feedback? If, not I apologize lol.

Jude stared out the window of his family’s small four-room house, he could see the cold that covered his whole world. They lived in a city trapped beneath a solid sheet of thick ice. Everything was coated in ice. The houses provided a bit of warmth but most of the time h…

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]]> cf875b11640c215e85d4512df943bf4f HighScribe replied to the topic I'm beginning a novel....thoughts? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/im-beginning-a-novel-thoughts/#post-173441 Wed, 17 Jan 2024 23:48:00 -0500 @autumnlily

This is an interesting start! The world is really interesting, and I like how you introduced the idea that everything is frozen over in the very first paragraph.

This is kind of nitpicky, but it’s what stood out to me the most: dialogue tags. I skimmed back over it, and I can’t find the word ‘said’ anywhere. Like I said, really…[Read more]

]]> 4110cabeb9ecdcecb0915a1c2f75fc25 Karissa Chmil replied to the topic Naming Chapters! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/naming-chapters/#post-163917 Fri, 10 Nov 2023 13:14:41 -0500 @autumnlily I’m sliding in a few days late, but I think that generally, at least from what I’ve seen, middle grade is the best genre for chapter titles nowadays. (There are certainly exceptions – think The Book Thief – but as a rule of thumb, that’s what I’ve seen.) And when it comes to that, I honestly think the best chapter titles are the ones…[Read more]

]]> e4d0bc2a88b2cf0467eb3e7a7457cb80 RAE replied to the topic Naming Chapters! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/naming-chapters/#post-163667 Thu, 09 Nov 2023 02:11:08 -0500 @autumnlily

Honestly, I personally don’t like long names to chapters that tell you exactly what’s going on. I usually like chapters that begin with a name that might give you a small hint, but are rather mysterious to the reader.

To show you what I mean, here is the name of the first chapter of Kidnapped by Robert Louis Stevenson

I Set Off u…

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]]> 87834634ef97bac055536622a2ebc700 Allison replied to the topic Naming Chapters! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/naming-chapters/#post-163642 Wed, 08 Nov 2023 21:15:09 -0500 @autumnlily

I am also naming the chapters of my WIP, I feel like it helps readers keep track of everything. It is a bit tricky to come up with a good name, I really like it when the name vaguely hints about what happens and one that dosent spoil anything. Theres a good in between, like you dont want to name one “This character died.” Instead, be…[Read more]

]]> 9ac3d36dd15b82ed7d931a8c2177e76f TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Hey everyone! in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hey-everyone-11/page/3/#post-145430 Mon, 29 May 2023 20:01:16 -0400 @autumnlily

A late welcome to KP! I’m the ArcaneAxiom, I love math, finding divine fundamental truth, and exploring that in my writing. I’m also big on sci-fi/fantasy. I’m currently creating a multiverse with my sister (Princessachronicle) called the Septrum.

Questions:

Hard or Soft worldbuilding? (Hard meaning more rigorously defined rules…[Read more]

]]> 4ccf503609ceadaea51fb4ec1298d5f1 TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Greetings from a new member! in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/greetings-from-a-new-member/#post-145429 Mon, 29 May 2023 19:52:24 -0400 @autumnlily

A late welcome to KP! I’m the ArcaneAxiom, I love math, finding divine fundamental truth, and exploring that in my writing. I’m also big on sci-fi/fantasy. I’m currently creating a multiverse with my sister (Princessachronicle) called the Septrum.

Questions:

Hard or Soft worldbuilding? (Hard meaning more rigorously defined rules…[Read more]

]]> 13751349a180ffcf52b1129e5251ffed Starshiness replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/ravens-quest-im-finally-sharing-it/page/2/#post-145120 Thu, 25 May 2023 21:37:57 -0400 @euodia.vision bahah I kinda had a feeling that would happen, it’s fine 😂 Awww tysm!! <3

(Pssssst, if you check the ships forums on the first page, I’ve got a couple blurbs about him 👀. And then I also just made a post about him in the “characters for my WIP” forum too!)

@keilah-h Thank you! Okii 👍🏽

@janellebelovedpig Yess, it really…[Read more]

]]> 3c36847564d4eb2b6f7a74c6a64dbc19 Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Greetings from a new member! in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/greetings-from-a-new-member/#post-144799 Wed, 24 May 2023 01:31:20 -0400 @autumnlily

Welcome to KP! I’m Solfyre, a homeschool girl just starting in ninth grade! I love wolves, dragons, playing guitar, basketball, writing, reading, drawing, and a lot of other stuff.

And I won’t ask you any questions either lol. (Totally not cause I can’t think of any right now XD)

]]> fb59c22f7c7b86eda0e46327db87655c Faith replied to the topic Greetings from a new member! in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/greetings-from-a-new-member/#post-144649 Tue, 23 May 2023 16:15:15 -0400 @autumnlily

Heyo! I’m AwsumFaith, a Christian teen girl who loves writing fantasy, drawing, singing, and obsessing over her favorite movies XD.

I see lots of peoples have already asked questions so I won’t ask you any more lol. Hope to see you around!

]]> 13bc9d94e8752c6305611eccb29d82c3 Smiley replied to the topic Chapter 2! in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/chapter-2/#post-144598 Tue, 23 May 2023 03:25:51 -0400 @autumnlily

I like it so far (:

does any romance happen?

]]> c98be26bda2495342405731d43790061 Joy replied to the topic Greetings from a new member! in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/greetings-from-a-new-member/#post-144578 Mon, 22 May 2023 23:40:02 -0400 @autumnlily Welcome!!! Great to have you! 😀

]]> 538520e7beff4fbd9ed99e7a86cf8256 Euodia replied to the topic Greetings from a new member! in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/greetings-from-a-new-member/#post-144539 Mon, 22 May 2023 15:58:27 -0400 @autumnlily

Hello! Welcome to KP!

I’m Euodia, a homeschooled, Christian, fantasy writer and reader. I’m also an artist, photographer, Middle-earth fangirl, farm gal, Marvel nerd, and lover of all things mint flavored.

1. Favorite names? (boy or girl)

2. Favorite name?

3. Top 5 favorite characters? (book, movie, etc.)

]]> 42f07b88effb0816afe0223f1713a840 Esther replied to the topic Greetings from a new member! in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/greetings-from-a-new-member/#post-144523 Mon, 22 May 2023 15:14:27 -0400 Welcome to Kingdom Pen, @autumnlily!!

I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, fiction-writing, God-loving, teen girl!!

Time for some questions! 😄

1. What’s the weirdest food you’ve ever eaten?

2. If could visit any country in the world, which would it be and why?

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]]> 43f941a67623ff1c788b89dc79f37087 hybridlore replied to the topic Hey everyone! in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hey-everyone-11/#post-144511 Mon, 22 May 2023 14:29:38 -0400 @mackenzie

Welcome!!! I’m hybridlore, also a Christian homeschooled teen girl who loves writing 😂, and you already sound hilarious so I’m sure we’ll get along great!! 😅

Aside from writing, I play the violin, love to read, and sometimes do art! 😉

Some questions –

Personality type?

Favorite books?

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]]> 86924fbb48bf7efe1d45b54cb4a59902 Allison replied to the topic Greetings from a new member! in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/greetings-from-a-new-member/#post-144498 Mon, 22 May 2023 12:07:56 -0400 @autumnlily

Welcome! I’m Acancello! I’m also home schooled! I love guinea pigs, dogs, traveling, acting, trying weird food, writing, reading, talking and a lot more 😀 ! I’m so glad you could come to KP! OK, now I’ll ask you some hopefully not already asked questions 🙂

What’s your favorite book series?

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]]> ac98acb46e6c9644da47621e074ea2d0 hybridlore replied to the topic Here is the first chapter of a series that I'm wrapping up! in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/here-is-the-first-chapter-of-a-series-that-im-wrapping-up/#post-144490 Mon, 22 May 2023 02:50:58 -0400 @autumnlily

Felicity breathed heavily pounding her fists on the ground and kicking her feet like a child throwing a fit.

Just rereading it, I think if Felicity is thirteen she probably wouldn’t act like this, but I’m not sure where the story goes after this so maybe I’m missing something?

]]> d00fab80c83f0f56602e74be777e3af8 hybridlore replied to the topic Here is the first chapter of a series that I'm wrapping up! in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/here-is-the-first-chapter-of-a-series-that-im-wrapping-up/#post-144484 Mon, 22 May 2023 02:44:33 -0400 @autumnlily

Ooh also reminds me of Alice In Wonderland a little 😅

]]> 289b14beb14c0383be398ac6e301bbd3 hybridlore replied to the topic Here is the first chapter of a series that I'm wrapping up! in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/here-is-the-first-chapter-of-a-series-that-im-wrapping-up/#post-144479 Mon, 22 May 2023 02:37:36 -0400 @autumnlily

I would also recommend grammarly to you!! It’s really cool, even the free version that I use 🙂

]]> 4cb612d8ea78806f11bc869c7ee1d4b6 hybridlore replied to the topic Greetings from a new member! in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/greetings-from-a-new-member/#post-144476 Mon, 22 May 2023 02:27:01 -0400 @autumnlily

Welcome!!! I’m hybridlore, a Christian homeschooled teen girl, and I also love science fiction!! 😁 I’m also kind of new, I started two weeks or so ago

I love reading, writing (obviously), and I also play the violin and draw 🙂 And yeah, I mostly write science fiction/dystopian but I’ve done some fantasy in the past!

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]]> ba6d3460942c932ac64ca28c3b8ee1ad Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Here is the first chapter of a series that I'm wrapping up! in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/here-is-the-first-chapter-of-a-series-that-im-wrapping-up/#post-144475 Mon, 22 May 2023 02:20:25 -0400 @autumnlily I love your world building! Blue cotton “grass,” purple trees, and other unique plants. Makes me picture a Dr. Seuss world. I’d love to hear more. Will there be unique creatures found here as well? Or is that too much of a spoiler? Sounds like a cool journey!

]]> 3b81e80be35f576cd034e7832bd29eee Smiley replied to the topic Here is the first chapter of a series that I'm wrapping up! in the forum Novel Critique Requests https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/here-is-the-first-chapter-of-a-series-that-im-wrapping-up/#post-144474 Mon, 22 May 2023 02:18:00 -0400 @autumnlily

Oooh I like it and I’m huge into sibling dynamics or really any family dynamics

I can’t help with the grammar because I’m terrible at it too XD

How old are the characters?

]]> b5ecc563da99f944f705d60faaf0b7ee Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Greetings from a new member! in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/greetings-from-a-new-member/#post-144473 Mon, 22 May 2023 02:09:14 -0400 Howdy @autumnlily!
I’m Janellebelovedpig, also just called Janelle. Most importantly I am a new creation in Christ. I also am a homeschool graduate, youngest of 11, and full-time sales clerk while part-time blogger, poetess, musician, and writing Christian.

Ooh! You write historical fiction. What’s your favorite time period? Do you have a…[Read more]

]]> a7d7e65f823424c1e19694147fe2820b MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Greetings from a new member! in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/greetings-from-a-new-member/#post-144472 Mon, 22 May 2023 01:59:47 -0400 @autumnlily

Hello and welcome to the group!!

I’m Min! I write dystopian fic, make comics, draw, and have too many other hobbies. A couple of questions for you…

1. Fav genre to write?

2. Fav themes to write and why?

3. Are snakes cool?

]]> 33c6761349a1c4b910d1067c5dcf9cae Smiley replied to the topic Greetings from a new member! in the forum Start HERE https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/greetings-from-a-new-member/#post-144470 Mon, 22 May 2023 01:40:25 -0400 @autumnlily

Hey!!!!! I’m Smiley (my real name is Miley) I’m a Christian homeschooled girl who loves writing. I’m currently writing three stories two are fanfiction and the other one is my original novel which is a sci-fi dystopian Christian book. I also love softball exercising and stretching, and I’m also a Marvel fan girl.

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