Autumnlily

@jonas @freedomwriter76 @highscribeofaetherum @trailblazer @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @princesachronicle22 @grcr @smiley @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @power @thearcaneaxiom @esther-c @scoutfinch180 @livingwoodchronicles @beth-torres @hybridlore @evelyn-collins I know we haven’t met, but I’m tagging you anyways…[Read more]

@autumnlily

I take it you’re looking for feedback? If, not I apologize lol.

Jude stared out the window of his family’s small four-room house, he could see the cold that covered his whole world. They lived in a city trapped beneath a solid sheet of thick ice. Everything was coated in ice. The houses provided a bit of warmth but most of the time h…

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@autumnlily

This is an interesting start! The world is really interesting, and I like how you introduced the idea that everything is frozen over in the very first paragraph.

This is kind of nitpicky, but it’s what stood out to me the most: dialogue tags. I skimmed back over it, and I can’t find the word ‘said’ anywhere. Like I said, really…[Read more]

@autumnlily I’m sliding in a few days late, but I think that generally, at least from what I’ve seen, middle grade is the best genre for chapter titles nowadays. (There are certainly exceptions – think The Book Thief – but as a rule of thumb, that’s what I’ve seen.) And when it comes to that, I honestly think the best chapter titles are the ones…[Read more]

@autumnlily

Honestly, I personally don’t like long names to chapters that tell you exactly what’s going on. I usually like chapters that begin with a name that might give you a small hint, but are rather mysterious to the reader.

To show you what I mean, here is the name of the first chapter of Kidnapped by Robert Louis Stevenson

I Set Off u…

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@autumnlily

I am also naming the chapters of my WIP, I feel like it helps readers keep track of everything. It is a bit tricky to come up with a good name, I really like it when the name vaguely hints about what happens and one that dosent spoil anything. Theres a good in between, like you dont want to name one “This character died.” Instead, be…[Read more]

@autumnlily

A late welcome to KP! I’m the ArcaneAxiom, I love math, finding divine fundamental truth, and exploring that in my writing. I’m also big on sci-fi/fantasy. I’m currently creating a multiverse with my sister (Princessachronicle) called the Septrum.

Questions:

Hard or Soft worldbuilding? (Hard meaning more rigorously defined rules…[Read more]

@autumnlily

A late welcome to KP! I’m the ArcaneAxiom, I love math, finding divine fundamental truth, and exploring that in my writing. I’m also big on sci-fi/fantasy. I’m currently creating a multiverse with my sister (Princessachronicle) called the Septrum.

Questions:

Hard or Soft worldbuilding? (Hard meaning more rigorously defined rules…[Read more]

@euodia.vision bahah I kinda had a feeling that would happen, it’s fine 😂 Awww tysm!! <3

(Pssssst, if you check the ships forums on the first page, I’ve got a couple blurbs about him 👀. And then I also just made a post about him in the “characters for my WIP” forum too!)

@keilah-h Thank you! Okii 👍🏽

@janellebelovedpig Yess, it really…[Read more]

@autumnlily

Welcome to KP! I’m Solfyre, a homeschool girl just starting in ninth grade! I love wolves, dragons, playing guitar, basketball, writing, reading, drawing, and a lot of other stuff.

And I won’t ask you any questions either lol. (Totally not cause I can’t think of any right now XD)

@autumnlily

Heyo! I’m AwsumFaith, a Christian teen girl who loves writing fantasy, drawing, singing, and obsessing over her favorite movies XD.

I see lots of peoples have already asked questions so I won’t ask you any more lol. Hope to see you around!

@autumnlily

I like it so far (:

does any romance happen?

@autumnlily Welcome!!! Great to have you! 😀

@autumnlily

Hello! Welcome to KP!

I’m Euodia, a homeschooled, Christian, fantasy writer and reader. I’m also an artist, photographer, Middle-earth fangirl, farm gal, Marvel nerd, and lover of all things mint flavored.

1. Favorite names? (boy or girl)

2. Favorite name?

3. Top 5 favorite characters? (book, movie, etc.)

Welcome to Kingdom Pen, @autumnlily!!

I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, fiction-writing, God-loving, teen girl!!

Time for some questions! 😄

1. What’s the weirdest food you’ve ever eaten?

2. If could visit any country in the world, which would it be and why?

And finally 3. What’s your favorit…[Read more]

@mackenzie

Welcome!!! I’m hybridlore, also a Christian homeschooled teen girl who loves writing 😂, and you already sound hilarious so I’m sure we’ll get along great!! 😅

Aside from writing, I play the violin, love to read, and sometimes do art! 😉

Some questions –

Personality type?

Favorite books?

What’s your favorite thing about…[Read more]

@autumnlily

Welcome! I’m Acancello! I’m also home schooled! I love guinea pigs, dogs, traveling, acting, trying weird food, writing, reading, talking and a lot more 😀 ! I’m so glad you could come to KP! OK, now I’ll ask you some hopefully not already asked questions 🙂

What’s your favorite book series?

Do you like to do any crafting or sports?…[Read more]

@autumnlily

Felicity breathed heavily pounding her fists on the ground and kicking her feet like a child throwing a fit.

Just rereading it, I think if Felicity is thirteen she probably wouldn’t act like this, but I’m not sure where the story goes after this so maybe I’m missing something?

@autumnlily

Ooh also reminds me of Alice In Wonderland a little 😅

@autumnlily

I would also recommend grammarly to you!! It’s really cool, even the free version that I use 🙂