Audrey Caylin

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I had been right. There was the sniper, only two meters away. I opened my mouth, let out an almighty scream and then put my hand over the muzzle of the rifle.

She purposefully puts her hand over the gun. I guess she could get shot accidentally though.

The other thing is: why was she there in the first place? Delivering a letter to…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Ah, copyright…the death of bloggers everywhere. not that I don’t appreciate copyright, but you know…it is annoying.

Okay, so at the end of Stars, Sapphire dies, you know that, and she dies because she purposefully places herself in front of Justice. Now, the problem I’m seeing here is that for the past two years Sapphire has l…[Read more]

@rochellaine

I was just about to ask you if you were back yet. How’s it going? are you willing to talk through a plothole with me?

@catwing Okay, goodnight!

@catwing Rin would probably pick the Niagara as well. 🙂

@catwing Oh well then, your lucky 🙂 I can imagine that they’d get tangled up though! I’m tangled in plot holes at the moment *groans and headdesks*

@catwing

Ah, I’m terrible at show don’t tell! And passive voice…urgh!

I have to delete a few characters from my WIP since there’s so many and quite a few are redundant. still, they’re my babies and I love them. I’m sad to see them go 🙁

@catwing Cool! How’s it going?

@alia Goodnight (feel better tomorrow!)

@catwing What are you editing?

@alia @catwing

I’m here and I’m sorta editing.

@seekjustice @skredder @sarah-anson (if you’d like to read it too 🙂 ) Chapter 7! 😀

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_aD1ola1rVG3cFwLSZ8S87nBtL7_j1xCdWK0rpUgpek/edit

@rochellaine

Okay, see you later 🙂

@rochellaine

I mean, just in one series I have Justice, Joshua, Jean, Jonas, Joseph, and Quillon’s middle name is James.

I read over the second last chapter and made some plans. Yesterday I changed the epilogue for the third time.

@rochellaine

That might be a tad too many Js, but I love J names! I think Marc is good, because it’s a classic name, but the C just makes it a bit different to plain ol’ Mark.

I think Tanya Doran sounds really good!

I think Walter is such a cute name 🙂

@seekjustice @rochellaine @alia Ugh, sorry guys I have to go. I’ll be on later though 🙂

@jenwriter17 Yep!

@rochellaine

What about, for the brother: Jay, Marc, Jason, Brandon, Corey…um, that’s all I got for now. Hey wait, I just realised that I took the brother’s names all from the 1970s page, when he wasn’t born then. Oh well 😀

The mother: Michelle, Tanya, Christy, Cindy, Natasha, Melissa.

The father: Timothy, Adam, Danny,…[Read more]

@seekjustice @rochellaine @alia Are you all still on?

@ingridrd Yes, it does help! I have to not worry so much about my word count and just do what fits my story 🙂

@alia Coffee’s always good. 🙂 See you later!

@rochellaine

Reading the old notes can either be exhilarating or terrifying. I worked out why Zac is so confused about whether he is Darnay or Carton though. My notes literally say “He is like Charles Darnay and he has an evil uncle”.

Okay…let me think about it. Are you looking for more traditional names, like Sarah, John, etc? or more modern ones?