Bella B.

@rochellaine Yeah, to prove she didn’t poison it. At least, there were two people defending her. That was nice of them I think.

Yeah, your MC needs a blanket.

@rochellaine Better, slower than I’d like (distractions), but not too bad. My MC is eating the “poisoned” food right now.

@rochellaine Well, they were discussing icecream in a roleplay. Right now, two of my characters are trying to convince someone that my MC is not trying to poison his wife.

I don’t know if your characters would like my story, but if they came to me I might just wrap them in blankets. 🙂

@rochellaine You can do it!! 😀

I don’t think there’s anything wrong with “phrowning.” It took me about fifteen times to spell the word “chocolate.”

@rochellaine Don’t quite know yet, I just started. How’s it going with you?

@rochellaine Are you still on? I can write for a little bit.

@filewriterbase13x  *appears from realm of the hiatus*

HiFileWriterIloveyourstorysofarcanIbeinittooit’sokayifit’stoolatethankyou!

*disappears again*

@kaya-young Thank you so much for that. I hadn’t planned for it to be formal and friendly. That’s pretty cool, though.

I’m really glad the flow was good and the content relatable and made you think. There’s really no point in writing it if it doesn’t do that. 🙂

Thank you very much for reading! 😀

@waterlily Thank you very much! I can try to trim down the introduction part.

I do plan on submitting it to a blog for publishing. Thank you very much for your suggestions. 😀

@filewriterbase13x Everyone?! Oh d-d-d-dear-dear! (please, someone tell me they know that reference!) That is most peculiar. Though I have to admit that if everyone has lost their mind, it does make sense what kinda happened to B-bot.

You included me!! Yippee!! Thank you! 😀

@filewriterbase13x Yes! That’ll totally work! And I know what you’re talking about.

@filewriterbase13x ooh yeah! I would love actual Rapunzel hair. And I’m gonna leave the character up to you. You can elaborate a TON if you want. I totally wouldn’t mind you adding in anything extra, but I can’t think of anything I would like to add in particular.

@ariel-ashira I just sent it to you! Let me know if you get the email okay.

@ariel-ashira I just sent it to you! Let me know if you get it okay. 🙂

@rochellaine I know someone else who kills their characters and nearly always brings them back.

Your characters either love you…or have a very strong dislike for you. 🙂

Oh, and this is the second person I’m killing in this short story. There is a purpose for it, I promise.

@rochellaine Wahoo! You’re almost there.

I’ve got to kill this guy and then I can end it pretty quickly. My sore hand isn’t helping matters.

@rochellaine  Better than it has, not as good as it could be. There’s probably only about 500 words or so left. I still need a title for it though. Hmm.

Are you still rewriting?

@rochellaine Heyo! 🙂

@seekjustice Oh yeah! Part 2! I can’t wait!! 😀

I do like writing short stories. Sometime they tend to get a little long because I just keep going. One short story ended up being around 18,000 words long. If I wasn’t on a deadline for that one, I could have easily turned it into a full length novel.

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