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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@linus-smallprint Just so you know, you accidentally put chapter 33 before chapter 32, and you have chapter 30 twice.
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@theshadow @theducktator @savannah_grace2009
Sorry for falling off the face of the planet there for a minute! XD Anyway, thank you so much for your feedback and I’ve read through it all and am FOR SURE taking every word into consideration (I just don’t feel like making individual replies to each one. I know. I’m lazy 🤣)
(Also, Sara, yes. It is…[Read more]
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Esther posted an update 11 months ago
Guyyssssssss… It’s been way too longgggg 😭 But I’m finally back!
Writing has been pretty nonexistent lately 😅 I haven’t really written anything since the end of March (and that was mostly editing anyway), and I’m really really hoping to make some progress and get into a better rhythm this summer. I feel like the unplanned break actually helped my…[Read more] -
Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months ago
Oh my goodness Sara… I can’t even imagine how hard that is for y’all. 🥺 I know I’m replying late, but I’ve been praying for you. 💕💕
Oooh exciting! Let us know how it goes! (to be honest, I feel like the test is pretty easy because a lot of it is common sense [besides the oddly specific questions about insurance…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 11 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@ellette-giselle awww that’s a shame! I echo Linus here, no one was hurt right?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed awww that was really cute.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@ellette-giselle you’re welcome!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@ellette-giselle I’m up for grammar/spellcheck!
Also to figure out what it was your siblings loved so much about the book.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 11 months ago
@whalekeeper yours are so wacky lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 11 months ago
all righty I got a bunch:
Chameleon woman joins a team of deranged human-animal hybrids and discovers they’ve all been made pawns in a plot spanning a century. Meanwhile, crocodile man desperately trying to hide his minor self-esteem issues wages a private war with everything, but mostly his own emotions.
Dragon-man from an unruly city…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 11 months ago
Bruhhh I should totally do this!! My stories have no shortage of weird.
Keep in mind that very few of them have names though.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Whoa.
That was….interesting.
Isaiah really does have a wonky moral code, ngl.
Nobody berate me for this cause it’s purely theoretical, but I had to kill a guy, and he had food, and I was hungry, I’d be taking the food. Not out of greed or wishing to thieve, but still. I see he said he didn’t want to steal and murder,…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 11 months ago
@grcr ohhh ok.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 11 months, 1 week ago
@grcr awesome. Are they related to each other or just three random characters.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
Huntress
We arrived at the cave. At first, Sniper and I tried to start a fire, but there was no decent wood around, so we ditched that prospect.
Felicity stayed to the back, rifling through her satchel. She had a gun in there, some ink (weird, was she a writer?), some kind of currency, and a few tickets that said they were for a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
@ellette-giselle lol
I was thinking maybe it’s like an adventure story or a war story and they’re all excited about that. Your other ones from what I can tell are more missionary, persecution, or godly-romance stories, and most boys I know of aren’t super into that, especially the last one. But I don’t know.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
What do your brothers love so much about it?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
@Ellette-giselle I will at least be there to give spelling and grammar advice. I wouldn’t pass up another great book from you!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
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Hey Esther!! Nice to see you around again!!
Sounds like a lot of craziness! 😂 How are you liking driving so far? And what new project are you planning to work on first?
I’m doing pretty good! My family moved and so we’ve been settling in and stuff but this week I’m finally starting to finish up my math (hopefully the last math of high schoo…[Read more]
Hehe, yes, but good craziness nonetheless! I’ve liked it so far! I’m kinda nervous and a little scared, but I’m mostly excited so that kinda overpowers the rest, lol. My brother’s also going off to college in the fall and he had been driving us places sometimes, so it’s almost like a motivation for me to be the new driver in the house (for my o…[Read more]
Yes, that makes total sense! Righttt. I’m just starting to be able to drive my siblings to the grocery store and it’s been fun. 🙂
Oh, awesome! I remember that one. Africa sounds really interesting… 😆
It was fine. We’ve moved plenty of times, and this one was a bit more sad for me, but I like our new house and neighborhood, and we’re starting to…[Read more]
Yes, that’s awesome!
Haha, yeah, I’ll be needing to do a lot of research, but I may save most of it for the end once I’ve gotten the whole story written out.
Good! I’m glad it’s been a pretty easy adjustment for y’all!
Ooh, fun fun! Oh yeah that’s a good idea! Do you have any idea what you want to do after high school yet??
Research, ugh. 😂 I would save it for the end too. XD
I want to write at least part-time, Lord willing!
I’ve also considered teaching violin or working as a librarian on the side. 😊 Do you?
Awesome, awesome!
Yeah, I’m hoping to get a degree in high school social studies/history education and/or youth ministry. I really want to be involved with high schoolers and ministry somehow in my future
HIIII ESTHERR <333
I'm so glad you're back, I was starting to wonder where you were…
(Like i'm one to talk, I'm notorious for randomly falling off the face of the earth so I get it girl haha)
THAT SOUNDS SO FUN!!!! I'm glad the last few weeks went so well for you!!!!
Writing's been nonexisitent for me too…I'm kind of stuck on my Andromeda…[Read more]
Oops I forgot you asked us to talk about ourselves too haha
Nothing much has been going on with me…I got a job at a coffee shop and I’ve been working 7 hour shifts almost every day which is exhausting but at least I get MONEY!!!
And I’m glad its’ keeping me out of the house too.
Besides the writing thing I mentioned earlier, I haven’t been…[Read more]
Outcry is such a great name, Sara!!
Thanks!!!
INDIANAPOLIS??? I’m in Indianapolis!
OMC!!!!!!!!!!
THAT’S SO COOL!
We’ll be either at the zoo or at a waterpark on July 4th..any chance we could meet up then?!?
We may be in Chicago then. I’d hoped plans would be nailed down before I replied, but it’s all still up in the air. If we’re here, I would LOVE that! Which waterpark?
@savannah_grace2009
So it looks like we will be in Chicago then. 😭 I really wish we could meet. Is the 4th the only possible date?
NOOOOO
yeah the 4th is the only day i’d be available *cries*
I’m actually going to the zoo that day (we’re splitting our youth group up based on what we wanted to do…one half is going to a waterpark and the other is going to the zoo.)
I decided on the zoo so it will be fun (:
But I’m sorry it won’t work!!!
Nooooooo! 😭 That would have been so fun! Would you be here again next year?
Thanks girl! <33
Ugh, yesss, I know that feeling. It can be really good to switch things up every now and then!
Oooh, that sounds like such a fun place to work! I got a job at a coffee shop near us and then was FIRED before I even started. 😑 It was because she thought they would be busier now that they had added ice cream to the menu, but…[Read more]
That’s so cool that you get to know her <3 And that's so sweet that you bring her starbucks!!! I'm sure she's so thankful to have you as a friend!!!
Yeah that's so true…
Hi!!! You’re alive! I have my permit now too! Passed the test first try, and even have some duck Student Driver magnets for our car! I’m scared though. It’s a 12 passenger van with enormous blind spots and an essentially useless rearview mirror.😬 I drove around a parking lot a bit after the test, and I’m driving again this evening. How’s your…[Read more]
Yay, that’s so exciting! Oof, yeah that doesn’t sound fun 😭 But hey, if you’re able to drive that, you’re able to drive anything, right? XD We have an SUV and a Ford Taurus that I get to drive, so yeah, a lot smaller, lol. But it’s been going well! I really like it and I can’t wait until I’m experienced enough to drive to school and church!
Ugh,…[Read more]
I’ve driven three times so far, and I’m driving again today. I’ve only hit two curbs, which isn’t too bad given the size of that van. XD I can’t wait till I can just drive places whenever I want to, though I know that I’m going to be the one always going to Kroger to pick up some forgotten dinner ingredient. XD
Yeah, I’m surprised too. But I’m…[Read more]
@theducktator You should totally join KDWC!!