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Active 10 months ago- Rank: Charismatic Rebel
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 16 hours ago
@savannah_grace2009 that’s cool!!
And hey, redrafting can be fun, reading through your story and thinking “oh, I gotta change that” or “what if I switch around these two scenes? It might flow better that way” or “let me change up this character’s role…..”
Except if you do too much. I read a comic recently that had 27 drafts before its final…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 days, 16 hours ago
@grcr you’re welcome!
@mineralizedwritings I exist to rant too lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 2 days, 17 hours ago
@theshadow Not me regretting I didn’t put a character in, cause this looks super fun lol
I vote Z, although X sounds fun too
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 17 hours ago
@savannah_grace2009 I love this one too! I’m assuming the story, or at least the beginning, has changed a lot from previous drafts. It’s going in a good direction!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 18 hours ago
@theshadow It was honestly better than I expected, good enough to keep!
I would’ve only changed the ending if like a bunch of them died in the end or something, which didn’t happen.
haha you’re good, no reason to worry
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 days, 15 hours ago
@stephie you asked about my reasons for obsessing over the Australian continent and all it has to offer?
well, it all started when I was four. I had a Leapfrog video game console thingy and one of the games my parents bought me for it was a “world exploration” kinda game. You were supposed to be helping two pilots circumnavigate the globe, and…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 16 hours ago
@theducktator haha!
yeah I love it.
@stephie yessss Italian food rules
I’m curious about the Australia story.
I’ll tell you all about that, but I’ll do it in the Chat Chat so we don’t take up Linus’s forum space lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 days, 16 hours ago
@grcr so Sverre is like my boy Crosshair in personality haha
he looks great!
@whalekeeper I have no idea who that is but she’s cool!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 14 hours ago
@liberty wowwww so pretty!!
I don’t think I read that story but now I’m sad that I didn’t. It looks amazing, and I love stories about wolf packs.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 15 hours ago
@liberty oooh I completely forgot about this forum. Maybe next time.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 15 hours ago
@theshadow yep!
also, I got back to working on that fanfic I shared with you. They FINALLY released that one last lore comic!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 15 hours ago
@theducktator I think so yeah lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 16 hours ago
@theducktator haha well I guess I’ll let you read it when I finish
And then you can go back and read my whole thing *evil chuckle*
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 17 hours ago
@whalekeeper Happens to me too lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 17 hours ago
oh and why I picked those nationalities in specific?
you probably don’t care but I wanted to get it out there lol- I’m of Spanish descent (and my dad had a flamenco album I used to listen to a lot when I was little haha)
- I’ve been to Italy and I’m OBSESSED with their pasta lol
- I’m an American citizen and lived there all my life
- I’ve…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 17 hours ago
@linus-smallprint I think letting it be up to the reader is good choice. Me, I can’t see why they’d go back to being human. The way you have your story set up, the different species are a symbol of different nationalities. And I don’t think our cultures will be completely taken away in the new heaven and earth. We’ll be part of one…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 17 hours ago
@linus-smallprint That’s what I thought.
What about nonwizards that are still half animal?
also I like how the way you did the switch was inspired by the book of Acts!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 17 hours ago
@linus-smallprint I love how it went to first person! I don’t know why. Maybe it’s cause I write in first person in my current WIP and haven’t seen anyone else use it in a while.
Wow! okay! Cyrus has given Alan a cruel ultimatum. I have no idea what Alan will do in this situation. I mean, Charles has already pointed out he’s not afraid to die,…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 17 hours ago
@whalekeeper oh ok!
honestly even if they don’t end up being compatible this is how you could find out if they are or not.
you’re just gonna have to deal with everyone’s crazy charries haha
@rae‘s Silvanis and my Sniper
(of course he’s mine, why did I have to say that lol)at the least are gonna be trouble for whoever you pick. -
Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 17 hours ago
@savannah_grace2009 It does have so much potential! And ehh, reading through it and editing little bits is half the fun for me lol
This is random but I’ve always been SO self conscious of my romance scenes…like part of me is obsessed with writing them but the other part of me is like I can never show this to ANYONE lol!
BRUHHH this is exactly how…[Read more]
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