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@vinagirl

Welcome, welcome!

(Now for my proper introduction XD)

I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, fiction-writing, homeschooled, God-loving, teen girl!!

I write fantasy and dystopian, and I’ve dabbled a bit in historical and contemporary fiction.

My name is Raegan. I am the oldest of seven children and a lot of…

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@jonas

I think Freedom’s adding a few more charries to the castle.

@jonas Yeah, a small one, so I can see how it’d happen.

The weird thing is that the Anaxes asteroids apparently kept their planet’s atmosphere? IDK, it’s sci-fi so I suppose that could happen. @thearcaneaxiom‘s Omialia makes a bit more sense since the asteroids are clumped together like a planet, held together by gravity, rather than being a…[Read more]

@rae yeah pretty much. Or just a random word.

@esther-c I’m always late to this XD

Tech

“Yep.” Ev affirmed. “Are you planning to come?”

Tech stopped in his tracks.

Rivet’s face flashed through his mind, but he pushed the image away. “I don’t know…..I am only twelve, and a date should be the furthest thing from my mind according to my older siblings.” he confessed, a bit embarrassed by…[Read more]

@jonas Fair point. Those are normal names, but they’re at least a little fantasy-sounding.

Snake’s Japanese name (since he came from a series of video games, and you know how the Japanese love video games), スネーク or “Sunēku” (google translated that lol) is kinda cool and fantasy-sounding, but since he appears basically Western and not Asian, I…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom Really cool! So she would know what a horizon is, but isn’t very familiar with an Earthlike one since in her world, she’d be seeing the other planetoids on the more broken-up edge.

There’s a planet in Star Wars called Anaxes that got destroyed by something (it never says what) and ends up being an asteroid belt kinda like that.

Those two… 🤣

@freedomwriter76

Alrighty! Here it is! (:

Everton

Ev woke with a start. His vision blurred and unblurred until he could finally see clearly. His eyes glanced over the stone walls and the flickering sconces.

Oh… this place again… He had been here before. Wasn’t sure how it had happened, but here he was in this wild castle again.

He mutte…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom I assume N’Nesha lives on some kind of asteroid, and that’s why she’s surprised at the horizon and the fact that there’s only one? (“Omia” is their species’ word for such planetoids, right?)

Also, I love how you deliberately misspelled Bucky’s name since she’s unfamiliar with it. What does she think of his metal arm?

@smiley Aww, that’s so horrible, poor girl!

@freedomwriter76 Steve, you’re like 6 foot 2 and 240 pounds of pure muscle, you could fight Dreykov and win if you wanted to!

JK….Dreykov really is the worst if he can terrify Captain America himself into doing his bidding…..

@jonas yeahhhh I think staring over would kill it

oh, and it’s so funny how all the other charries have these weird fantasy names and then there’s just “Snake” and “Rocky” lol

@beth-torres Snake can swim….in freezing water, too….

@freedomwriter76

Sure! Sounds good! I’ll get to writing their first RP later this afternoon, but feel free to do one before me. (:

@freedomwriter76

Aww 😢 Poor boi. He needs hugs. 🥺

@loopylin

Oh my word, I love that. 🤣

@savannah_grace2009

I love how neat this outline looks. Lol. Cuz my method of plotting differs with every book and story I write. XD

I’d love to critique it, but I don’t have the brain power to do that right now. And since I offered to give you feedback on your WIP, I might just wait to read it instead of just the outline.

@beth-torres

Oh, ok, gotcha.

Lol, that’d be funny. 😂

@savannah_grace2009

Callista 

“Um, I believe I saw a sign when we were walking through here earlier. If I remember right, they’re being taught by the dance instructor from the school. Actually you know what…” she pulled out her phone. “I’ll be right back.”

After a minute or so, she returned. “Alright. I found the instructor’s website and I’m fi…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I knowwwww

I just recently wrote the scene where Amir dies and afterwards I was like, “Esther, why did you do this?!?!” (But I also wrote a short epilogue that I absolutely love because for the most part the subplots have been resolved, but the epilogue leaves a wide opening for a sequel…. 😏)