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@mineralizedwritings

I think the first one is pretty good, but I think they all need to be more parallel. (This is something I’ve struggled with in naming the books in my trilogy) It always depends on the series in how your naming them. For example, the titles from WFS are exactly parallel. On the Edge of the Dark Sea of Darkness, North! Or Be Ea…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Aww I love the sunrise part! And sweet Ami…and Ev!!

Yes, I love those two!! 🥰

These two paragraphs were my favorites. You did them so amazingly well! I love how she’s realizing that God created it, and thanking him for it with her joy. ❤❤❤

Thank you so much!!! 😊❤️

I love how Ami views nature like that. (I have another cha…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I love that!!! I could really see the sunrise in my head, and it was sooo good!!! AMAZING job, girl!!! 💖💖💖💖

Thank you so much!!! 😄😊🥰❤️

That means a lot!! ❤️

@thearcaneaxiom

How well simulated is the Orb’s sunrise? Would it look cartoonishly fake? Like a yellow spot going up and down, or does the Orb make it look far more like t…

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@lightoverdarkness6

Aww thank you SO MUCH!!! Yeah it was nervewracking writing it…lol. Ah good! I’m so glad you liked it!! 🙂 ❤️❤️

Lol

Of course!!! <3

@lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @princesachronicle22 @gwyndalf-the-wise @whalekeeper @loopylin @anyone-else-who-cares-to-critique

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@acancello

Alrighty! 👍 😀

@mineralizedwritings

oh, just finished it!

Woo-hoo!! 😄 XD

XDXD This is literally my oc’s Tauren and Lesli. She’s been doing that to him since he was little and won’t stop now that he’s a foot taller than her lol. ( I mean if he asked her to she probably would)

That’s awesome!! 🤣

Is it weird that “That’s why they call me ‘wine hands.’ ‘Cause of what I do to your liver!” is one of my favorite TV show quotes?

@freedomwriter76 Yes, Peter was a very interesting character in this show!

@princesachronicle22 Ok! I just don’t really have anything for my character to do yet. When i’m out of ideas I usually just wait for someone to say something and then make my charrie reply.

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 I really enjoy The Chosen too! I can’t pick a favorite character though. It changes from episode to episode. That one scene you’re talking about was hilarious though!!

@godlyfantasy12 Ah, I see. That would be bad if they just walked in.

Charries of mine like Feather and Jareth would totally get the “It’s God’s place! You can’t just WALK IN!” idea. I’m not sure if all of my others would get it though…you all need to work on that, guys…..

So what exactly does each one look like? I know the Fae are the winged…[Read more]

Can I bring some of my charries? Your people might be a bit freaked out by them tho……lol

@godlyfantasy12 I love it! I could probably live there…it sounds so beautiful.

@godlyfantasy12 I’m loving your worldbuilding! Is it based off of any culture in particular or something you made up?

Also, a bit off topic, but…how many “races” or sentient species of being do you have besides humans?

@princesachronicle22 @mineralizedwritings Either of you going to RP yet? (Unless you already have and I didn’t see it) I’m waiting until one of you has a turn.

@joy-calle Depends…I might take you up on that….but then again I might not. I’m kinda indecisive about this sort of thing….but if I decide to do it, I will!

@godlyfantasy12

That sounds really cool and unique!! I really like that!! 😄

I really need to worldbuild more. XD The history part was easy cuz it was based off of America, but I want the customs to be more unique and that will take more work. Lol

@acancello

I pretty much was thinking what @mineralizedwritings was, I just couldn’t say it as well as she does. XD

From this beginning, I can already get a feel for the personality of the POV character. (Who I’m assuming is Shauna 😉 ) If you share more, please tag me! I’d love to read more and hear more about your story!! 😀

@livingwoodchronicles

Welcome back, Ky!! So glad you’re back! 😀

I guess I shall introduce myself in case you don’t really know who I am. I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, God-loving, amateur writer!!

I’ve heard a little about your book from you on here and it sounds really intriguing!! I’ll have to read it s…[Read more]