Arien

@acancello

Nice! I would say it’s better, but the restaurant scene could have worked with some changes too.

I staggered over to an almond tree that was bent into the shape of a seat that was covered in moss and fallen flower petals and sunk down on it breathing hard.

I would make that sentence separated into two, it’s a little long.

@godlyfantasy12

Ah, I would, but my family is about to go out to eat! I’ll try to get one in tonight, if not, then tomorrow. 🙂 Sorry!

@godlyfantasy12

Aww Aaron!! He’s so precious and sweet <3<3

And…that picture…Wow. Just WOW. XD

@freedomwriter76

Happy Birthday!!!

I hope your birthday is AMAZING!!!! 🥳🎉🎈🎊💖

Thank you so much 😊🥰💖!!!!! It has been pretty amazing so far 🥰

Aww Liam!! Riker!! And Cameron!!

XDXD Damien!! He’s so cute.

@godlyfantasy12

im also wondering if Vance is still going to get away with Bren because that group is getting large… but I also am enjoying t…

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@artsy-dragon

Very cool! I like the person!

Oops, I mean the Shal’le 🤦 Sorry! XD

@esther-c

Girl…

That scene…

Was…

AMAZING!!!! 🤩

I really enjoyed reading it and it kept me on the edge of my seat! Can’t wait to see what happens next!!! 😃✨

Aww thank you SO MUCH!!! Yeah it was nervewracking writing it…lol. Ah good! I’m so glad you liked it!! 🙂 ❤️❤️

@princesachronicle22

AHHH!!!! Dylan, Asher!!! That was so good girl!!!

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@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

Ah sorry girl! I probably won’t be on much the next day or two, tomorrow is my birthday and I’m going to be gone for a lot of the day. And yes, I think it’s your turn to split up the groups! 🙂

Also, is it my turn to RP as Vance?

@euodia-vision

You’re so welcome!! 😀

@godlyfantasy12

well I don’t think their ages would change. I just had mentioned earlier in RPs that their adventure had just started so we’d have to ignore that XD

Sounds good!! And wow, Aram looks very mysterious…

And Oh My Gosh Ginny and Aaron!! That’s adorable!!! 😁❤️🤩 AHHH it’s so much like November and Ara!!

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@esther-c

oh, just finished it!

He let her lead him to the circle the group had made. Ev stood next to Lukas. He ruffled his hair and smiled down at his little brother. Lukas looked up and frowned.

“What?” Ev whispered.

“I’m a teenager,” Lukas replied.

Ev grinned. “I know. I’m supposed to embarrass my teenage little brother. Right?”

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@lightoverdarkness6

❤️❤️❤️

@godlyfantasy12

OOOH!!! He sounds SO cool! And sneaky…reminds me of Vance, lol. Yeah, I’d be fine with it!! Like changing their ages and such, and what they’ve done so far in the book(s)?

Ah sorry! I’ve gotta get off, my family is getting together down on our land, but I can talk when I get home this afternoon! Talk to ya later! 😀

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

Oof yeah…he probably won’t 😬.

He’s going to try to find out about Bren’s powers without Madelene and Alex knowing…

OH!! I just had an idea. Freedom, so Viola is after Bucky, right? And Vance is after Asher, and maybe Aaron..and now Dylan. What if those two team up? Like have a truce and help one another find…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

XD XD speaking of, Ik Alex and Madeleine still have to go but do u wanna go ahead and RP as Vance or wait?

I’m kinda bored rn not gonna lie XD XD

Ah I’m doing math rn, I might be able to talk later! I’ll let Freedom go first, if that’s alright with y’all. 🙂

@freedomwriter76

I’m good with it! 🤣🤣 Haha, Vance will be SO excited about all the people XD. But that’s good! I want to make him as annoyed as possible, XD

And yes, 3 groups is great! And I think they’re as perfectly matched as we can make them XD 🙂

@freedomwriter76

Aww GIRL!!! THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!!! That makes me feel so good!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️🥲🥲 AHH I know!! The poor babies 😭😭😭😭

I’m SOOO glad that you enjoyed it and can’t wait for the next parts! You are soo sweet!!! ❤️❤️

(Awww girl! ❤️🥲 I’m so glad that it was moving! As a writer, I’m so happy…but as your friend…I’m sorry for making you h…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Aww okay! I sure will! 🙂

@mineralizedwritings

Thank you so much! Haha, yeah. It’s one of my favorites scenes so far…and don’t worry, Asher is okay.

@lightoverdarkness6

woah that was good! Super curious to know how that will play out!

@godlyfantasy12

Haha, yeah! I’m so glad that you’re interested though!! 😀 Thank you! It makes me feel so good 🙂