Arien

@kyronthearcanin

Oh, those are nice!

@freedomwriter76

You are welcome!! ❤️❤️

Oh, I see. That makes sense. XD

That’s great! So glad you’re doing well! 💗💗💗115 pages? 🤩🤩🤩

I love that metaphor about carrying the mat, sounds like a great message! AWW! That sounds adorable!

I’m ok, lots of driving practice this week so I can meet the requirement of 50 practice hours and get my…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

LOVE IT!! I NEED MORE TINY LEO!!

So sweet! You did it so well! Not exactly a critique but when the sister questions about what he’s doing with the decorations, it wasn’t obvious to me she meant ill will, so it seems a little like Leo over reacted and started it XD

I can tell from reading the rest she’s not very nice…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

I might join over the summer! I’ll have more time to write higher quality than, and because the writing is public, I wanna make sure it’s my best 🙂

@kryonthearcanin

2. Favorite theme? Trying to figure out this question. I don’t know if you meant genre or something else, sorry.

Lol yeah that one confuses some people. Theme= message. So or some books it might be like friendship take sacrifice, it could be family is more important than money, learning to give up pride ect….

3. Rina was a p…

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@kyronthearcanin

Hello and welcome!

Your character looks cool! Great art! 🙂

I’m mineralizedwritings around here! I wright dystopian fiction, make comics, and draw… among other hobbies. As to your question, mostly dystopian but I wouldn’t deny it has some fantasy like elements. My worldbuilding consists of a lot of ruins, and I like to make…[Read more]

@esther-c

Great question! I agree with Arcane that it will be different for every one.

I personally would say it is true for me. The parts I find boring to write are boring to read, and I simply do not write them. I keep a mental checklist on my head of things I have not included that must be added soon (Say a charater backstory that has to be…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

Vance

Alex suddenly turned around to face me and Bren, anger evident in her face…and tone of voice. “Well, Vance,” she spat my name with venom, “which way should we go…?”

I raised a brow, and glanced down the two corridors we had come upon. Honestly, they looked nearly identical.

I shrugged. “Whicheve…[Read more]

@joy-calle

Could I have your email pls? I can do instagram too.

I saw the email thing on your website, but it won’t let me see it unless I sign in, and windows seems to have some questionable things it wants to do… (let it basically do anything it wants with my account? Like no excuse me? XD)

@ligtoverdarkness6

Thanks!

@esther-c

ok, I’ll keep that in mind. The first book actually refers to something different from the other ones, the term afterthoughts is used to refer to a unwanted group of people, where as the other one literally mean thoughts. So maybe I should change it to m=not have parallel titles and instead have…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Ok yeah, that’s what it looks like. It sounds like the checklist is for what you would need to get published though, so lol I’m a little confused XD

And same! I might try to do some this summer, it seems like fun!

@mineralizedwritings

I love those 😍😍!! Yes, I think it can work. It sounds good! 🙂

@esther-c

Aww I love the sunrise part! And sweet Ami…and Ev!!

Slowly, the sky grew lighter, and the edge of the sun began to peek over the horizon. The dew glistened in its light. It illuminated the sky with hues of rose, peach, and daffodil. The sunlight…

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@princesachronicle22

Wow!!!! That’s SOOO good girl!! I love the detail and how clear it is. 😍😍😍😍

I have that problem too, like smoothly transitioning scenes, especially for memories and flashbacks.

Hmm…well, you could connect the next scene with maybe Anwyn like wincing at the memory, or some kind of reaction.

Or maybe Vermilion could say…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

IKR? SO COOL! XD I want to see the short story checklist, idk why I can’t click it, I suppose it’s because it hasn’t launched yet?

@princesachronicle22

The first part was good! I don’t really read stuff that goes into that much detail about peoples torment XD So I stopped reading, but I’m sure it was great. Love your writing style btw!

@Thearcaneaxiom

Thanks! And thanks for the feedback 😀:)

@princesachronicle22

Thanks!!

@thearcaneaxiom @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76 @esther-c @felicity

I’ve been thinking about the order of my books, how would this sound for titles?

Afterthoughts of Hate

Afterthoughts of a Releaser

Afterthoughts of The Left Behind

(Haven’t come up with a good title for the fourth yet…)

Honest opinions? Does it…[Read more]