Ariella Newheart

I agree with @dragon-snapper. Also, any hard sounds. Like ‘k’ and ‘t’ for example.

@hannah-c
Looks good to me! Your story sounds very interesting. 🙂

Wow, @bluejay! This is so good! And the shape…brilliant. 🙂

@dragon-snapper
If I didn’t write, my mind would explode with all my ideas. I heard a quote by Ernest Hemingway saying, “There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed.”
That’s really all writing is to me. It’s pouring my heart onto paper.
My goal with my writing is to glorify God. Even if I’m never published, I hope…[Read more]

I agree with @daeus, but…hmmm. It sounds very interesting, @clairec. 😉

@bluejay
1. The Witch of Blackbird Pond
2. Ella Enchanted (even though I’ve read it twice. It’s amazing!) 🙂

Hello, @Alia! I don’t believe I’ve had the pleasure of meeting you yet. I’m Ingrid. 🙂 🙂 🙂
Oooo. I love the name. And I think that’s a great trilogy title.
So, you need a name for the individual books in the trilogy. I think I need just a bit more information before I begin giving you ideas (and mark my words, they may not be good ones. 😉 )

Hello, @Alia! I don’t believe I’ve had the pleasure of meeting you yet. I’m Ingrid. 🙂
Oooo. I love the name. And I think that’s a great trilogy title.
So, you need a name for the individual books in the trilogy. I think I need just a bit more information before I begin giving you ideas (and mark my words, they may not be good ones. :))

Hello, @Alia! I don’t believe I’ve had the pleasure of meeting you yet. I’m Ingrid. 🙂
Oooo. I love the name. And I think that’s a great trilogy title.
I have a question: are you asking for advise on the names of the individual books in the trilogy? I may have missed that…

Hello, @Alia! I don’t believe I’ve had the pleasure of meeting you yet. I’m Ingrid. 🙂
Oooo. I love the name. And I think that’s a great trilogy title.
I have a question: are you looking for a name for the individual books in the trilogy? I may have missed that…

Ooohhh…lovely. Great work, @bluejay. 🙂

@hope
I like the second one better, but they both work. I noticed just one thing.

The name he is give appears nearly impossible to live up to, no matter what he sacrifices.

I’m assuming you meant “name he is GIVEN appears…” 😉

@hope
I definitely like the second one better. It’s great. I noticed just one thing.

The name he is give appears nearly impossible to live up to, no matter what he sacrifices.

I’m assuming you meant “name he is GIVEN appears…” 😉

Welcome, welcome, @Anne-Swiftblade!
Narnia and Lord of the Rings? You’re my kind of girl!
Can’t wait to get to know you!

A writer is someone who sets words to paper and perseveres at it, regardless of how widely published they are or not.

Beautifully put, @theliterarycrusader. I love you already. Welcome! 🙂

Hello and welcome, @graciekry, to the…agh, too many people have already said it. *shrugs*
I am also a huge Lord of the Rings fan! High five! I’ve only ever read Much Ado About Nothing of Shakespeare’s, and I loved it so I’m planning on reading more in the near future.
Anyway, welcome!

Hello and welcome, @graciekry, to the…agh, to many people have already said it. *shrugs*
I am also a huge Lord of the Rings fan! High five! I’ve only ever read Much Ado About Nothing of Shakespeare’s, and I loved it so I’m planning on reading more in the near future.
Anyway, welcome!

@clairec
*exhales shakily* *sniffs and blinks back tears* This is so moving and VERY well written. I’d have to agree with @Bluejay; I was so absorbed in the story that I didn’t have time to cry! I was tearing up, though. Excellent job on the characters. Nothing to critique. Amazing job, Claire! 🙂

And I just read the poem… 🙂