Ariel

@joy-caroline

See you, Tuesday then! Have a nice break:)

@godlyfantasy12

I LOVE THOSE! Especially November’s! (*Calmly keeping myself from breaking out in emojis*)

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@nova21

I absolutely love those:D The first one was especially good and that’d be so awesome if you shared the first chapter! 😀 I’d love to read it!

@godlyfantasy12

Wow! That beginning raises so many questions! Amazing:)

@gracie-j

Incredible! I loved all those beginnings and the first one wasn’t boring at all:)

@e-k-seaver

Those are very good!

@gracie-j

Aww, girl, you’re so encouraging!!! ❤️ Thank you, I’ll tag you when I post it!!!

@everyone

Y’ALL.  This is AMAZING!!!  I ❤❤❤ everyone’s SOOO much!!!!

Ok, I have 2 WIPs, so here’s the first one, As Dark As Mist and Shadow:

Scars tell stories.  They tell of our success and failures, of our wins and losses.  Some people let their scars define them, but some define their scars.  I survived, mine say.  I can’t be beaten…[Read more]

@writerlexi1216

YAY! It worked! I cannot wait to read this! 😀 😀 😀

@joy-caroline

You underestimate yourself, those are great first lines! 😀

@devastate-lasting

Thanks:)

@writerlexi1216

No need to apologize (I’m not always the best with technology either:)

@seekjustice

Thank you! Your first sentences are awesome too! It painted such vivid images and made me wonder more about who this character is:)

@writerlexi1216

Hmm, I tried to open the file, but it says I don’t have access. You may have to open the file to sharing, but no worries about rushing (okay, the reader in me is saying rush:)
But seriously, no need to rush, whenever you can is awesome:D

@writerlexi1216

THIS IS SO AWESOME! (whoops, I was shouting wasn’t I?) Ah, I’m just so excited that you’re sharing your first chapter! 😀
I am a slow reader, but I’m gonna start on it right away!
😀 😀 😀 😀 😀

@kathleenramm

Thank you:)

@godlyfantasy12

Currently, I haven’t been writing a lot of fantasy since my current WIP is more of an adventure that I’ve been careful to keep fantasy out of for plot reasons.
But I do love writing it, especially the worldbuilding:)

But DO NOT get discouraged by first drafts. I recently looked through a few first drafts of an author whose…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting

I love that first line! It’s so whimsical and eerie; it’s fantastic:)

@kathleenramm

Oh my goodness, I love your first line, it immediately made me wonder about the character:)

Here are the first three sentences from the prologue in The Snow Warrior. The prologue picks up a few days after she’d been abandoned. She didn’t have her Title or sword then either, so it’s one of the few ‘before’ scenes in the story.

The…[Read more]

@imwritehere1920 You’re starting a blog!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GIRL, THAT’S SO COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃😃😃 Let me know when you get it up! So, I do a lot of the same things Issabelle does (’cause, well, ya know, we share a blog). I’m not very good at technology, so what I know, I probably learned from Issabelle too. Often, pictures I download from…[Read more]