Ariel Ashira

@skredder Haha!  I’ve been going around the house singing “It’s a Lovely Day Today” all day. 😀  Spring finally decided to show up with 70 degree weather (after it snowed just three days ago!) and everything is bright and cheery.

Is today special for any particular reason, or did you just mean that it’s special because you decided to keep wr…[Read more]

@rochellaine Normally, you’d be right. But today is a special day! And it’s going slowly.

@skredder Oh hi! I thought you’d left. 🙂  Glad you’re still here!  How’s it going?

@rochellaine I still am.

@ariel-ashira I’m finally here! 🙂  How’s it going?  Are you still here for a bit?

@ariel-ashira Nope!  I’m still doing dishes. 😉  I said I’d be here in a little over an hour, not for a little over an hour. 😀

I hope it’s going well for you, and I hope you’re still on when I get here!  Hopefully that won’t be too long now…just as soon as I get the dishes done…

@jenwriter17 That is the best thing! 😀

@skredder Haha that’s awesome! 🙂 *goes around the house saying it to family members* *laughing at their weird looks* 😛

@rochellaine so sorry, I won’t be here 🙁

@ariel-ashira Of course. I’m praying!

@rochellaine I might still be. Can’t guarantee though.

I’ll be here in probably a little over an hour.  Will anyone be on then?

@jenwriter17 @skredder @seekjustice @jess-penrose @sam-kowal @alia @ariel-ashira

@jenwriter17 Yeah, it’s one of my and my mom’s favorite sayings. We read that phrase in an English course where they were talking about unnecessary sentences that had nothing to do with the essay topic. It has become a staple writing phrase for us. It’s just way too fun to say! 🙂

@skredder Will do! 😉

“Carrot in the cookie jar” 🙂 I don’t think I’ve heard that one before 😀

Anybody else on right now? I’m gonna be writin’ for a little bit. 🙂

@jenwriter17 That’s no problem. 🙂

Oh, I did have a request. As you read, could you point out any places it feels like I’m head-hopping or changing POV? Also, if there are any scenes that seem slow or unnecessary or feel like the carrot in the cookie jar please point those out to me too. Thanks. 😀

@filewriterbase13x  Oh no! I hope you find it!

@skredder Awesome! Like I told others I’m reading for, I probably won’t get to much of any of it until Monday or Tuesday. I’m looking forward to it! 🙂

@seekjustice I got caught up finally! Sorry for not reading this earlier. 🙁 It was really good! I really enjoyed it! 😀

@skredder @ariel-ashira @rochellaine

Thanks! 😀