Ariel Ashira

@filewriterbase13x  *appears from realm of the hiatus*

HiFileWriterIloveyourstorysofarcanIbeinittooit’sokayifit’stoolatethankyou!

*disappears again*

@kaya-young Thank you so much for that. I hadn’t planned for it to be formal and friendly. That’s pretty cool, though.

I’m really glad the flow was good and the content relatable and made you think. There’s really no point in writing it if it doesn’t do that. 🙂

Thank you very much for reading! 😀

@skredder  I thought it was great! Your writing style was formal and friendly- I don’t know if that was what you were going for but it was really enjoyable to read.

I thought that it flowed really well, especially for how short it was and how much content you have packed in there. 🙂 The order of it all works well too.

It did make me think, and…[Read more]

@filewriterbase13x Yay! I’ll try to get to this Monday or Tuesday 🙂

@filewriterbase13x    Oh Wow! I love this so much! Thanks for putting me in! 🙂

I think the line “I was going to try to explain to the friendly giraffe that we had lost our minds and believed that she had too,” could explain all of kingdom pen. Lol. 🙂

@waterlily Thank you very much! I can try to trim down the introduction part.

I do plan on submitting it to a blog for publishing. Thank you very much for your suggestions. 😀

@filewriterbase13x Everyone?! Oh d-d-d-dear-dear! (please, someone tell me they know that reference!) That is most peculiar. Though I have to admit that if everyone has lost their mind, it does make sense what kinda happened to B-bot.

You included me!! Yippee!! Thank you! 😀

Agh! I mean @skredder.

Oops, @catwing and @skreeder

A Kingdom Pen Adventure: Truly Lost our Minds

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The File Writer of Base13x (@filewriterbase13x)

Part Four: The Losing of Minds

“How? How could I have lost it? It must have been during or after the storm. The storm. Why did I remember that but not who my neighbors were?

I was walking through a forest that I didn’t remember the name of,…[Read more]

@filewriterbase13x Yes! That’ll totally work! And I know what you’re talking about.

@rochellaine  Welp.  I gotta go again.  Byeee!

@ingridrd My western, as usual. 😉  But now I’ve got to go, so farewell, and happy writing!

@rochellaine  Same as yesterday.  The sequel for my fantasy WIP.  🙂  Wbu?

@ingridrd You’re not too late. 😀  I’m still here.  What are you working on?

@rochellaine  I know I’m late, but I am here now (for a little while).  🙂

@ariel-ashira Do you not know how to edit posts after posting them?

Well…I’m trying to.  The man just refuses to be rescued.  Actually, though, it’s Chara’s fault.  She’s taking too long to find him.  I really hope she can find him soon, or the story will be pretty boring. 😛

@ariel-ashira Yes, I’m still here!  What are you working on?