@arcticanimals
Active 1 year, 7 months ago- Rank: Charismatic Rebel
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
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Beth replied to the topic Read through the Bible??? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 8 months ago
Oh! Nevermind, I just saw that you put we’re stopping at Sunday.
I’m so sorry, ignore the last thing I said.
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Beth replied to the topic Read through the Bible??? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 8 months ago
Did anyone else start on Monday because it was January 1st? I was so confused because I skipped Sunday so I was three days behind for this week and I just realized why.
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-GRCR- posted an update 2 years, 8 months ago
My new theme song is Unwritten by Natasha Bedingfield.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Back Stories, the thing that shapes life in the forum Characters 2 years, 8 months ago
Oh, interesting!!
(I didn’t know his wife’s name was Selena though lol)
I almost feel bad for them…
But then I remember what they do to Otto and Lilitu and Marcurious and Neveah and basically everyone important in my story!!! AHHHH!
Lol, Ahhh…. that’s how I feel about my antagonist Neon…💛
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HighScribe replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 8 months ago
I’m glad she’s doing better 😊❤️
Yw. I’ll keep praying that you can get this fully sorted out 🙂
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HighScribe posted an update 2 years, 8 months ago
Spanish has some twenty-something forms of ‘run’. Carrera, correr, corre, corres, correo, corremos, corren, corrí, corriste, corrió, corrimos, corrieron… do you get my point?
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Yw. Yeah, it probably is.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Ricochet? (Why does it need a ‘t’? 🤦♀️)
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-GRCR- posted an update 2 years, 8 months ago
It hasn’t snowed yet, but I’m soo ready for summer.
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Ive never lived in snow, but 17 degrees is freezing for me in NC. Im used to a CA winter of 40 at the lowest, lol. But yes, I’m ready for summer!
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lol 😅
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Read through the Bible??? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 8 months ago
Alrighty!! 😄
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 8 months ago
Aahhh your boards look amazing!!! I love them!
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-GRCR- posted an update 2 years, 8 months ago
I’ve reached 20k on my WIP!!
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Good job!!🥳 🎆
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Thanks!! 😆😄
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HighScribe replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 8 months ago
I’ll be praying for you, too.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Lol XD
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 8 months ago
Ofc.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 8 months ago
Oh dear… I’ll be praying for you!! 💛💛
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-GRCR- replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Ah, I see. 😄 lol
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-GRCR- replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 8 months ago
Interesting chapter!! I like it!
oh, and I really loved this:
“Give me one good reason why I shouldn’t kill you right now,” the Pythonos pressed the bloody knife to Marcurious’ throat.
Marcurious coughed. “Because I am just so amazing,” he flashed the Pythonos a smile.
One question… how old is Marcurious?
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HighScribe posted an update 2 years, 8 months ago
Gahh!! I was experimenting and playing around with present tense and now my brain gears are jamming now that I’m trying to do past tense again! It looks so wrong GAAHHHHH!!! XD
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Just…don’t do present tense.
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Y?
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Cause it usu Sounds weird.
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Typos ignore
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Cause it sounds weird? Was that what you were saying? After a bit, your brain shifts, and you dont even notice it. I like it with first person, as long as it isn’t just for no reason.
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@jonas I personally LOVE doing first person present tense, but not third person present. Because I switch both tenses and person, I often have no problem with my brain gears.
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Yeah third person present tense is bad. I personally don’t care for present tense at all. I think of it similarly to second person narration.
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@jonas @rae
I’m just gonna jump in on this conversation lol…
I also LOVE first person present tense…but I HATE…I mean HATE third person present…unless of course I’m writing a certain depressing short story about my life a couple months ago heh…heh….OH! I cannot STAND second person…*retches over the side of the bed* Like WHO in their…[Read more] -
@savannah_grace2009
The thing with second person is that it implies that the reader is the main character, which means you can’t design your own character. One week in my creative writing class, we did have a 2nd person assignment, but it was a choose your own adventure story. -
@jonas
I know! That’s the sad part…no fun characters ):
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Yeah that’s true…haha!
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This is the technical side to present tense. Present tense adde immediacy—it feels like it’s happening *right now.* This is really good in some specific scenarios, but there’s one major problem. It is hard to maintain, it’s exhausting to read something long in present tense. Second person should almost always be present tense, and first person…[Read more]
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@freedomwriter76 I’m not saying it’s bad to read, but when it comes to writing…I like the big picture. Besides, I write from the POV of Ru Eis most the time, and since she researches the events, they can’t really work well for Present Tense. It’d be like Laura Hillenbrand doing present tense for Unbroken.
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