Josiah DeGraaf

@seekjustice I finished it! (I pushed off my to do list to finish it because I couldn’t stop 😉 )

I love this so much already! It feels so good to read about these characters again, and I love how Chessy and Justice’s relationship has gotten.

But, uh…………

CLIFFHANGERRRRRRRR!

I am so looking forward to the next part!!! 😀

@skredder ooh, now you’re getting me excited! 😀

@rochellaine lol, your meme is very accurate! 😀

bad girl, @seekjustice, bad girl! Your readers are weeping oceans and you just say we “should have learnt by now”?!

😛

I’m on page 11 right now. Awesomeness so far 😉 I should finish it within the next hour, cuz I had a few other things to take care of (ahem, like my broken heart). 😉

@Dekreel woohooo I love it! *tosses confetti* xP

@SeekJustice @Sam-kowal I’ve actually already got a cabin (plus several other offers, haha) so I’m all good, thanks though! Have fun with the Kapeefer cabin!

@skredder Okay, will do! 🙂

My answers to your questions:

1) I really enjoy the family, so I would keep reading.

2) I think the first line was good because it establishes very soon the close relationship of the family and the lifestyle.

3) So far, I think the characters are consistent 🙂

4) Yup! 😀

It is, definitely. You’ll get it right, though, I know it. 😉

@skredder I read it! I still love this family 🙂 …..

There were only a few little things I commented on. I saw you said that it was supposed to be in Casse’s POV, which I didn’t know; I thought you were doing omniscient POV. I would suggest more following Casse’s action and her thoughts to make it her POV.

I’m looking forward to the next part! 😀

*sighs*

I hate to say it, but I think your friend was right.

It’s not a bad thing, necessarily. The chapter introduced the family dynamic, and introduces a few things that will (obviously) come into play later in the story, but it doesn’t have a whole lot of oomph–by which I mean, something that draws the reader into the story. There’s…[Read more]

@skredder I’m ready for it any time you’re ready to give it  😉

@seekjustice Yay! I can’t wait to read it! I requested access 🙂

Hi! I popped in and read this too, just ’cause I was curious. Hope that’s okay.

Overall, it’s really good so far! I’m just a bit confused as to whose POV you’re using to tell the story? At times, it seems as if it’s being narrated by someone altogether different from the characters in the scene, which is kind of disorienting.

Other than that,…[Read more]

Hey @valtmy, I’d also like to point out that google docs does have a feature you can set the doc to that allows you to pick and choose who has access to your doc based on their email, so if you wanted to do it that way, you could.

@dekreel. You are a chosen one!  Congratulations!

@skredder Did you draw that?

@warrenluther04 Yay!!! I’m praying that she will return to your church 🙂

Yours and @dekreel‘s return will be celebrated with much cake and happiness 😉 Bye for now. 🙂

@dekreel. I love it!!!  What an awesome, satisfying ending!  That was awful nice of Snapper to let Jenna use the chair. 😀 CHRIST IS RISEN!  JESUS CONQUERED DEATH!!!  Hope the rest of you kapeefers have a wonderful day!

@dekreel this story made me so happy! I love that ending 😄❤️❤️❤️Thank you so much for writing this series <3 Yes, He is risen indeed!!!!!

@dekreel ah, again sorry I can’t draw him cuz I’m still pretty busy 🙁