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@jonas

Yes, yes, YES! That’s literally EXACTLY what I was thinking, too!

I completely agree…it was so much fun when our characters would argue and then get to know each other!

Well, the quickest way to make them fight is to start DRAMA, which could be anywhere from a love triangle (we’re desperate, okay!?!?!) to accidentally offending…[Read more]

@mcmuffin

Sorry I’m late to the welcome party, haha!

I’m Sara, a fantasy writing, horse loving, dog obsessed, chicken hoarding teen girl!

I live on a farm in Montana with my family and attend a public school!

Do you have any hobbies? Favorite foods?

Sorry, I’m not good at asking questions XD

@everyone

My problem is just with all the fighting scenes….I’m more of a basic romance loving girl, and I just get so lost when there’s so much action!!! If that makes sense. I can try to be better…it’s just so hard for me to love RP’ing when I just get lost, XD

@beth-torres

I would love to do this! But sadly, I’m not sure I can, because our church is doing something called a “super bible bowl” where we divide our congregation into teams and read the bible, take notes and memorize verses to get points for our teams. We have the NFC (never failing Christians, led by our senior pastor) and the AFC (the…[Read more]

@esther-c

I am so sorry! I have been forgetting about this!!! I will write an RP right now!

Livia

“I guess we’re supposed to switch partners?” Liv said uncertainly.

“I guess,” Lukas shrugged.

“Oh!” Liv exclaimed, “There’s Callie and Fynn! Do you want to switch partners with them?”

“Sure,” Lukas said, smiling at her. Liv blushed, but turned…[Read more]

@rae

Oh. Well. This is going to be….interesting.

@esther-c

Wait, do I have to pick a freevie?

I wasn’t sure if I was reading that right…if I have to, I pick Asher.

@esther-c

1. Everton (OBVIOUSLY!!!)

2. Amidala (OBVIOUSLY!!!)

3. Lukas (bc I have to meet the guy who’s dating my charrie, lol)

4. Callie

5. Hallie (because she shares a name with my sister, haha!)

@freedomwriter76

OH GIRLLLL!!! I am sooo doing this!!!

(@rae I think we both had the same idea…haha!)

1. Riker

2. Hans

3. Reuben

4. Fin

5. Aadelheide (not sure if I spelled that right…haha!)

@esther-c

I love this! Abbie Emmons just confuses me the more I watch her to be honest…and the internal conflict stuff just wasn’t working for me and was soooo overwhelming, but you did a really awesome job of developing your characters!!

@hybridlore

Aww it’s cute! I actually like it! For some reason it reminds me of “A Series of Unfortunate Events” books. Idk why XD

@highscribeofaetherium

I was laughing so hard!!! The plunger gun…ahhh that was great! hahaha!

Mr Mwahaha…that’s hilarious!!

@highscribeofaetherium

*is so confused*

Um…..that is the UNDERSTATEMENT of the century lol I was questioning 13 year old Sara’s sanity when I read this….

I’m glad you changed directions with your novel lol.

Ummmmmmmmmmmmm YESSS. I actually thought this junk could get published!!!

THIS IS WHY YOU NEED PLOTTING! OR ELSE YOUR WRITING WILL END U…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Yeah….but the problem is that i’ll have to have implants when I turn eighteen because those teeth will never grow back…so there will be holes in my mouth for eternity. Fun times!

Okay so a backstory-they are Andromedan, but they were kidnapped when they were little and taken to Earth. In this convulated version of a novel, I had it that all Andromedans had purple hair and yellow eyes. They lived a normal human life, etc.

But on Earth all Andromedans take the form of humans, and then the mc’s lost their memory. Now they…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

Because he’s from Earth and they’re not.

I mean I get where I was going…but it is still really, really dumb.

I WANT TO BURN THIS.

“Because,” Liv says. “You are going to use your powers to bring our parents back. Or else.” What powers?

“Or else what?” Jorryn challenges. Oh great. The last thing we need right now is for Jorryn to get cocky.

“Easy there, ‘spitfire’!” Gael mocks.

“It’s gonna be bad,” Liv assures us.

“You don’t know, do you?” Jorryn…

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@jonas

I never ever threw my writing away, no matter how bad it was….i have every single horrible story I ever wrote in a huge binder. I remember thinking the stories were good…and I recently read threw it again and wanted to burn it.

Another embarrasing scene for you:

. Jordan grabbed her arm again and yanked her over to him. He handed her…

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@rae

oh my gosh….lol I was reading it and I was like, oh it’s really good! and then I read this sentence:

I can’t tell you what Nahim’s face looked like because he never showed it to anyone.

And then I laughed.

sorry if that sounds mean…..

And now for the worst thing I have ever written:

“It worked!” Jorryn cries.…

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