Aranel

@esther-c

Oh that sounds great! (oh my word I just saw this…sorry about that!!!)

I love DRAMA…hehehehe so I am going to love the third book!

@esther-c

THIS IS SO CUTE!!

Livia

“Are you sure?” she laughed.

“Definitely,” Lukas nodded. Xandro snorted, slowly bringing his nose closer to the milkshake.

“Um…no. You already had candy,” Liv gave him a look.

Ooops I just realized I forgot to put something in Italics but I’m too scared to edit it in case it deletes my post…

So essentially the Great One sent him to help Sef by showing what was happening to her in a dream, if that makes sense.

Lilitu’s been having that same dream for a while now, and later it makes him feel like it’s his fault because he could have helped Sef earlier if he’d just taken action sooner.

@freedomwriter76 @esther-c

Okay…so this scene/chapter comes before the scene where Iver abuses Sef. (I just wrote it last night after looking at the plot and realizing I’d forgotten a major part!!!)

Anyways….

The girl opens her mouth and screams.

Her screams echo off the walls, begging for someone, anyone to hear her.

Her pain is vivid,…

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@esther-c

YES, YES, YESSSSS!

*subscribes*

@esther-c

We can have them talk…but if you want we  can for sure skip ahead!

Livia

“Sure!” she shrugged. “I don’t mind…I doubt Xandro would be allowed inside anyway.”

@anyone-stalking-the-forums

LILITU!!! AHHHH

Sef was pulled from her sleep with a touch on her arm.

She flinched and pulled back, retreating deeper into the covers.

“Sef, it’s only me,” she heard Indie’s voice.

She dared to peek out from her cocoon.

Her pain had diminished immensely, though her knee still throbbed.

The thought that haunted…

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@freedomwriter76

I knowwww he’s so sweet! <3

@esther-c

I CAN’T HELP IT!!!  😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

And thanks <3

Guys…sorry I know this is kind of a long segment…so just ignore this if you don’t have time!!

And then a bad guy POV….

SPOILER ALERT–Iver’s actually not real-real. He’s actually a Pythonos in disguise. Pythonos that use Dark Magick to take the form of other people are called Weavers. Anyways…

The Weaver awoke from his drunken state and beheld his disheveled apartment.

He closed his eyes and listened for the thrum of the girl’s h…

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@freedomwriter76 @hybridlore @acancello @esther-c @scoutfinch180

Okay…part TWO of the sad scene…

Lilitu walked briskly down the dimly lit streets, Sef’s emaciated form in his arms.

Though his foot pained him, he could barely feel it now.

His body thrummed with adrenaline.

She was so weightless….his stomach turned. He could feel every bon…

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@beth-torres

Okay!!

@esther-c

Livia

She smiled as if to reassure him, unsure of what to say.

And then she felt a familiar warmth on the back of her neck.

“Xandro!” she turned around, letting go of Lukas’s hand and hugging Xandro’s neck. He snorted.

“I know, I know, I may have forgotten about you…” she hung her head guiltily. Xandro grabbed Lukas by the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I know…he makes me SO MAD!!!

You can give her hot cocoa and blankets…she needs it…😭😭😭

Don’t worry…Lilitu’s rescuing her <333

OH MY GOODNESS YOU PUT LEFSE IN YOUR SIGNATURE!!!! That means so much to me!

Thanks for reading it <33

I wrote it in English at school (we weren’t doing anything and had free time) and was…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 (you might have to call the protection squad on this one….) @hybridlore @acancello @esther-c @scoutfinch180

Here’s a chapter I just wrote…I’m pretty happy with it but it’s SO SAD!!!

“Sef!”

She heard the door crash open upstairs, and her heart plummeted to the soles of her feet.

It was late.

Very late.

The odds that Ive…

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@trailblazer

I think I’ll keep Ottoline. Since Marcurious wasn’t here originally I don’t think I’ll keep him.

@esther-c

That’s so cute! I love Ev <3

@rae

It was so sweet! <333

@rae

Oh my gosh…girl…. XD you have a problem

INTERVENTION!

jk, jk, lol