Aranel

@grcr I love it!!!

Ottoline

“Do not worry,” Amir turned his warm eyes to the trembling boy. “She only shoots deer. Lucky for you.” Lane nodded.

“It’s not my statue,” Ottoline scoffed, rolling her eyes. “I couldn’t care less if you broke it or not.” Lane sighed with relief, brushing the hair out of his eyes.

“Just do not scare her, or she might…[Read more]

@grcr

yep! lol

@grcr @acancello @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @esther-c

Ottoline

She stepped inside the building, and stopped dead in her tracks.

“What is this place?” she asked in awe. Brightly colored streamers fluttered from the ceiling, multicolored lights lit up the room, and the stone floor shone. A strange kind of music filled the room. She…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I’m so excited!!!!

@highscribeofaetherium @loopylin @acancello

Thank you so much! She’s my favorite character <3

@freedomwriter76 @acancello @highscribeofaetherium

this is my favorite moodboard I’ve ever done. I’m new to this, but I love this one! She’s one of my MC’s.

@trailblazer

Yeah, for sure! If you want to develop characters more, character questionaires have really helped me. Here’s one I found and have used: https://www.novel-software.com/character-questionnaire/

I love everyone’s personality and how the older brothers want to protect their little sisters. It’s so sweet!

@freedomwriter76

thanks for the tips!

@mineralizedwritings

Awww I’m sorry! I hope things get better!

@light-warrior-pen

thank you! I love Sef and Lilitu, they are SO CUTE <3

@trailblazer

I hate misunderstandings with teachers! That’s the worst! I feel so bad for Albert 🙁 and I’m so happy they protected Libbie and Etta!

@acancello

Thanks!

@trailblazer

Okay, that’s probably better anyway haha! But the suspense is killing me! I love good romance, so right now for some reason I really want Libbie and Albert to become a “thing”. lol.

@acancello @trailblazer @freedomwriter76 @grcr @mineralized writings (I think that’s everybody? Sorry if I missed anyone!) Okay I’m bored and I’m procrastinating getting ready for school (where I live it’s 6:30 am rn), so I’m just gonna roleplay. (sorry, @esther-c ,haha) Also, when you RP you can either do it in third person like I’m doing or in…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

OH MY GOSH CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!! I am so happy for you! You’ll have to tell me the name when you actually print it so I can read it, haha!

One of my goals is to publish my first book before I turn 16/before I graduate. (I’m really young for my grade, so I’ll be 16 my senior year and then in september I’ll turn 17 then graduate…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Also, I have to know…is Libbie ever going to fall for Albert? It’s okay if you can’t say because of spoilers but I just wanted to know, haha.

@trailblazer

Got it! I’d just never heard it before, but it makes sense.

@sarafini

One thing I noticed was that it was really hard to tell that it was a dream. If you weren’t looking close enough, you would have missed it. So since it’s a dream, you might want to make it more obvious. But I liked your story! It was good!