Aranel

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom

Hey, it’s me again, lol. I have a question. Is it fine to give a side character a POV if it’s for one or two chapters?

Here’s some context. If you guys remember Liv from chapter 5 (where Lilitu steals bread), I was thinking she could play a part in Lilitu’s story. She’s kind of secretly supporting the Paynes and I wanted…[Read more]

@acancello

I should have the next scene done by tomorrow for the RP 🙂

Oooh I’m excited! I’ll wait to write mine until you post it, because I don’t want to accidentally have the same idea, lol. (And I RP way too much on here, lol)

@janellebelovedpig

AHHH! I think Sarafini left us! NOOOO! All her posts say anonymous and I can’t see her profile 🙁

@mineralizedwritings

Yeah, it’s really small! and 500 is just the population of the town! There’s 12 kids in my class and 120 kids K-12!!!!! It’s kind of crazy compared to some where the graduating class is like 600. There were 6 seniors last year!

You can do something ou don’t like for a little while, and she might appreciate it if you played p…

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@freedomwriter76

Oh my gosh…that is so sad!!!! what makes it even more sad is that is an accurate representation of how the war was, and that is how some people had to live.

WOW. Girl, you’re amazing for finishing it! When you get it published you should send me a signed copy, lol.

@mineralizedwritings

What I could really use prayer about right now is fear though. My dad wants my sister and I to be safe, but his way of doing that growing up was to make me scared of bad things in the world. It’s really bad, and one of the lasting effects of his way of parenting, the thing that’s hardest to forgive him for. It’s hard to forgi…

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@thearcaneaxiom

(Uhhh, has anyone noticed that @sarafini has vanished? All her past posts say anonymous now… Did she just leave?)

Yes! I was hoping she didn’t leave….maybe she got her account deleted or smthn?

I like this chapter! My favorite part was how happy the robot got when he named her “Thing”.  that was great!

@grcr

SOMEONE UNDERSTANDS MEEEE!!! <3

@smiley

*Gasps* I love the blue theme, and oh my word she has blue hair!!!!

I’ve always wanted to write a character with colorful hair XD

Thanks!

She’s part of a race that has blue hair, blue eyes, blue skin, and the power to manipulate water. I am so happy with how it turned out!

@mineralizedwritings @grcr @freedomwriter76  @smiley

Aww guys thanks so much!

Freedom, it seems like everyone knows about your charries…but since I’m new (and forgive my lack of knowledge, lol), care to share what your WIP is about? I know it’s about WWII, and have read some of your snippets, but I don’t know very much… and your boards are…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Yeah…I guess we did kinda get WAY off topic…(which I don’t mind, lol) but when we get back on track I’ll tag you, haha

@mineralizedwritings

I’m doing…okay, I guess. thanks for asking!

It’s hard for me to force myself to be social, especially with people who I have nothing in common with and who think I’m a little mentally insane because of how much I write (which they might be right…). I’ll talk to myself while I’m writing in class and stuff, so…yeah.

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@acancello

I love the church clap! We do it all the time at my summer camp!!!

@trailblazer @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings

Aww guys you’re so sweet! Thanks! <3

I don’t have in person friends, what you see here on kp is about what I have aside from my sister, who I’m pretty close with. And yeah it’s super scary but guess what I just talked to somebody today 😝 and she wasn’t a family member, and I recognized her from my…

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@freedomwriter76 @smiley @mineralizedwritings @grcr

Here’s my newest board!

@acancello

Lol! Maybe you should try going to events in your town with your family? Or like I said above, events with friends? Oh! Having a party for no reason at all is also fun!

I’m not trying to push you to do anything you dont want though😊 I just hope you get to meet some real good friends💗 💕 🤗

The problem is…I don’t have very many good f…[Read more]

@rae

This is okay a little bit and in some places (for instance I think it was well-used in the scene where Lilitu was telling Sef his dream) but eventually, and in some places, it just gets annoying and interrupts a read.

Okay, got it! I agree I definitely overused those in this segment.

@whalekeeper

Also about the critique on…

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@rae @mineralizedwritings @esther-c

Here’s a new scene I’m working on. Thoughts? Concerns?

She ran across the prairie. She didn’t know where she was going, and she didn’t care. Running helped her to forget…to forget last night, and all the other nights like it.

“Scream all you want…ain’t nobody gonna here you…” she could still feel the welts…

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