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ClaireC replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@perfectfifths, your name is Louise! I am still talking to the same ‘@perfectfifths‘, right?
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ClaireC replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@ethryndal, @perfectfifths, Yes! I know, pretty obvious. Good movie, huh?! 🙂
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ClaireC replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@ethryndal, @perfect-fifths, Yes! I know, pretty obvious. Good movie, huh?! 🙂
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Is the "love interest" necessary? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Heh, no, that wouldn’t end very well. 😛 I’m kinda scratching my head on how I gave that impression. I was just seconding what Gabrielle said:
They helped each other through their struggles. They helped each other grow. They actually had a relationship, if you know what I mean. Not just a you-look-pretty-we-work-well-together…
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
ah, @dragon-snapper, I just had an idea. Daeus loves to sing, he’s always singing, and he sings really well. He loves symphonies, too. Oh, he loves symphonies! (Did I mention he wants to write one of his own?) If you could capture his love of music in your story, it would be really accurate. 😀
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@dragon-snapper I absolutely cannot believe that I didn’t see this earlier!!! Wow, this is great! Although…. I do have to say that Daeus isn’t like how you pictured him. He really is very kind and not at all controlling or desiring of power… 😀 But I do have to say, the part when “As they marched into the armory, Daeus conldn’t help but say,…[Read more]
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@daeus give credit where credit is due. 😀
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@daeus that was my idea!
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@Clairec I want to say The Princess Bride, but I’m not sure…
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ClaireC replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
Here’s one that everyone knows.
*nasally voice* “Marriage…” Ready, set, guess! Okay, the answer will literally leap into your heads. 😉 -
ClaireC replied to the topic Reader Behavior Survey in the forum Publishing & Platform 9 years, 5 months ago
@daeus. Yep, I’d have to say she’s my #1, too. 🙂 I thought it was really nice of her to say yes. And it does seem rather awesome, doesn’t it. 😉
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ClaireC replied to the topic Reader Behavior Survey in the forum Publishing & Platform 9 years, 5 months ago
@daeus, I’ve been in contact with Katie Weiland (https://www.helpingwritersbecomeauthors.com/) a few times about writing questions, so I wrote and told her about it. She has not only taken by put it on her twitter page. 🙂 Awesome job, by the way. Katie said it was very well put together.
https://twitter.com/kmweiland?lang=en It’s about halfway…[Read more] -
Ethryndal changed their profile picture 9 years, 5 months ago
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Ethryndal replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper @Emma-Flournoy *passes out bottles of complimentary glitter* Sweet Elvish waybread, I haven’t had my own kingdom since Lothlorien! *rubs hands in anticipation* I’d better change my profile picture back…
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Is the "love interest" necessary? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@Winter-Rose YES. Why do writers not do it more often?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Is the "love interest" necessary? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper @GracieGirl @Winter-Rose yep. You said it.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Is the "love interest" necessary? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper @GracieGirl @Winter-Rose Totally agreed.
They actually had a relationship, if you know what I mean. Not just a you-look-pretty-we-work-well-together thing. It meant something.
Gabrielle, exactly.
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Snapper replied to the topic Is the "love interest" necessary? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@ethryndal @emma-flournoy I think that if they had kissed at the end it would’ve messed up the scene.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Is the "love interest" necessary? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
Sometimes, simple is better. The hug at the end was WAY more powerful than any words or kisses.
AGREED. Gushing and kissing, sheesh. That hug was so incredibly sincere it was WAY better than any gushing or kissing would’ve been.
*buys a piece of candy for Cassian when he was little*
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@Ethryndal I’m not sure myself, but now you’ll have a glittery Elf kingdom for your domain!
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