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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 *gulp* Um… yes. Apparently I did. I’m sorry… it slips out when I get excited around people I like. 😉
It doesn’t have to be a physical difference at all. The difference you pointed out is perfect. Thing is, you have to realize the way people act is directly tied to their EiLs. Tam and Kara differ there, and that is the…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 YES! Blake also seems like a really, really great opportunity to be an Impact Character. In fact… you could make him the one with the complete thematic truth. That it’s better to face reality than shelter in ignorance. A very unlikely bearer of truth— maybe the reader doesn’t see it at first. But if you give him that, his…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 not a problem. 😀 And if you think this is great… sweetheart. Wait until KP actually releases the Theme Mastery course I learned all this from. I was a beta-tester… it changed my life. YOU MUST HAVE IT. OKAY. (I was not paid for that advertisement. 😉 )
To go about building a story… well… you need to figure out what…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 I stayed on as long as I could, but I have to sign out now. I wrote 1414 words tonight. Thanks, and good luck!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 all right!
*rolls up sleeves* You ready?Okay. Let’s see how well I can say this.
DISCLAIMER: before we proceed, I just need to remind you (and myself 😛 ) that this is your book and nothing I say should pressure you against your better judgment. I can tend to take over with projects I’m really interested in and I so do not…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 I’ll be on for fifteen more minutes or so.
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Snapper replied to the topic Spring Writing/Reading Goals in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
Alrighty! Another stone on the road to completion–I’ve reached 10,000 words! Yaya!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@jane-maree And you two, if you wanted to give us some inspirational pizza. *big smiles*
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Artistry Emergency in the forum Art 9 years, 5 months ago
@Perfectfifths You speak wisdom.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@jenali @that_writer_girl_99 @winter-rose @daeus @graciegirl @ethryndal @perfectfifths @northerner I’ll be writing till 9 or so.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Artistry Emergency in the forum Art 9 years, 5 months ago
Btw, @Kate-Flournoy, I think you nailed it.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Artistry Emergency in the forum Art 9 years, 5 months ago
@Perfectfifths *sigh* I totally missed the English gentleman look that I was aiming for…
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 5 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Aha. I think you should make that a little clearer though. Not explaining it, because obviously, you want it to be confusing, but just showing that something abnormal happened. Because honestly, I thought she was having a dream.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Artistry Emergency in the forum Art 9 years, 5 months ago
@Anne-of-Lothlorien Well, here’s my attempt, which, after reading your description again, I don’t think is very accurate. He’s too young and adventurous looking. I may try again later.

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Ethryndal replied to the topic Artistry Emergency in the forum Art 9 years, 5 months ago
@Anne-of-Lothlorien Well, here’s my attempt, which, after reading your description again, I don’t think is very accurate. He’s too young and adventurous looking. I may try again later.
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Snapper replied to the topic First or Third? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
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Snapper replied to the topic First or Third? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
I have another question concerning POVs. It sort of like Gideon’s question concerning multiple POV’s from first person. But would it be too confusing if I did multiple POVs from different characters, such as one person would be first person in a chapter, then the next chapter would be third person? Then after that another first person, and after…[Read more]
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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic Composing Music in the forum Music 9 years, 5 months ago
@dragon-snapper I play piano and generally write classical-style music. The stringed instruments are great to use on MuseScore.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
I’ll be writing here for a few minutes.
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Snapper replied to the topic Composing Music in the forum Music 9 years, 5 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Awesome! What type of music do you write, and which is your favorite instrument to use?
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