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@f5a8c3e92 It really depends on how you’ve done the rest of the novel really. It could easily be seen as a copy, unless you give it that unique aspect or feel. And you’re already pointed in the right way for that.
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@f5a8c3e92 Aha. I think you should make that a little clearer though. Not explaining it, because obviously, you want it to be confusing, but just showing that something abnormal happened. Because honestly, I thought she was having a dream.
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@jane-maree Yeah. I’ll still try and work it as far from that style as possible. 🙂
@ethryndal Reading over it again, I see what you mean. This is what critiquing is for after all! 🙂 I shall work on it after I finish my homework. *scribbles down a reminder*
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