Anika123

@imwriteher1920

Thanks

@imwritehere1920

Thank you for the feedback, and also I have got one book published so far, and the novel I put up here, is going to get published probably by next year

@imwritehere1920

Ya, that’s fine

@imwritehere1920

Hi,

I would love for you to give me feedback

@abigail-m

thanks, and if you want to beta read my work, you can go to the beta read thread

@elanor

Try now

@iluvhim18  @elanor

I have changed many things in my novel, please read it and let me know your feedback

@elfwing

Thank you for all that feedback I will work on it

@iluvhim18

Thanks for the feedback

I will work on that

Thanks again

@raevyn star

I can give you feedback on your work

If you are still looking for someone to give feedback to you

@elanor

Oh ok, i will try to keep it informal, I never realized that

Thank you so much for your feedback

@elanor

What can i do to make my dialogue better and less choppy to read and flow better ?

I have my own podcast in which I give writing advice and tips

Here is the link if you any of you want to listen

anchor.fm/anika674

Thank you so much for all the tips everyone

Thanks for the constructive feedback

Thanks for the feedback