Looking For Critique Of Realistic Middle-Grade Book

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October 6, 2017 at 12:59 pm #47334
raevynstar
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@salome01w4g, any time.

@xonos-darkgrate, https://docs.google.com/document/d/10s-ZbFiyZpzw7VMkC9uuV-o5RtEjc6NW1cj9kWu-yok/edit?usp=sharing
October 6, 2017 at 1:09 pm #47343
Joseph Darkgrate
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I just read it. Overall, I thought it was okay. A few mistakes like a random letter or such. Maybe it’s just my eyes. If you were seriously heading for an unlikable main character, you really achieved it! (not to offend you or anything)

I think it’s pretty good, but what I caught was that occasionally there were gaps or something like that. Small bits not explained enough or examined. It also felt a bit rushed in one part. Other than those few things, I liked it. @raevynstar
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October 7, 2017 at 6:25 pm #47579
Jessi Rae
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@raevynstar Hey! I’d love to read it, but unfortunately life is busy right now. 🙁 I’m really sorry!
May 13, 2021 at 1:24 am #99630
Anika123
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@raevyn star

I can give you feedback on your work

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