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Esther replied to the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
Thanks so much for the feedback!! I’m really glad you enjoyed it!!
Yeah… I was a little on the fence about the kissing part, but I went with it anyway bc 1). I didn’t go into detail. 2). It’s supposed to be a bit Hallmark-y, if you know what I mean. 😅
I’m glad it made you laugh. After all, that was the point! 😁 Thanks fo…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
Any title ideas are appreciated!!
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Esther replied to the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
Part 1
Brynn Laurier handed Grandma the steaming bowl of soup. “It’s hot,” she warned, setting it down in front of her. Grandma took a large sniff of the soup. “Smells good,” she said.
Brynn watched as Grandma took a spoonful of the soup. She tasted it for a moment. “Perfect,” she proclaimed. Brynn smiled. Finally, she had nailed Grandma’s sou…[Read more]
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Esther started the topic The Christmas Grandma Disappeared (Working Title) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 8 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @theloonyone @arien @starofthenorth @felicity @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @anyone_please!!
Hey, everybody!!
So, I wrote a short story for my grandparents for Christmas. It’s supposed to be cheesy. I need all the feedback and critique I can get, please!!! A…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Okay, I need a MaIn ChArAcTeR name in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
Cool character!!
So… I’m not sure if this is an actual name, but it just randomly came to mind.
Xavien.
Oops. Three syllables. 😅
I don’t have any other ideas now, but if I do, I’ll be sure to tell ya!!
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Ev… my boi… 🤦🏻♀️ 🤣
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Amidala
Ami winced as she toppled to the floor. Strong, but gentle hands pushed her off of the young woman she had knocked down.
The young man next to her helped the blond haired girl up. They exchanged a few words. Ami tucked her hair behind her ear and was about to push herself off the ground, when the dark haired man held out…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Holiday Novella! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
That sounds really cool!!! You should totally go for it!!
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Esther replied to the topic Forum For Pictures of our Charries!! in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
I love your characters’ names though!
Thx so much!!
@godlfantasy12
IKR?!?!
I may have to write out of order for once… 😮 😏 😂
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Esther replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
@those-I-have-yet-to-reply-to
I read through all the character name meanings and they’re great!!! I really like all of them! (I know I didn’t take to the time to tag everybody, but for real, I did take the time to read through all of them! 😅)
@godlfantasy12
Oooooh! It think I know who you’re referring to! I maaaay have peeked at the spoil…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic I'm making a comeback babyyyy in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
But, yo, thanks for all the great ideas! Your brain is indeed genius. 😌
Lol
Thx. I try… 😁XD
Really interesting genre idea!!
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Forgot to tag everybody!
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin @theloonyone @keilah-h @aagh!!-i-feel-like-I’m-missing-someone
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@godlyfantsy12
Gotcha, gotcha 😉
But whatever happens, I kinda need my charries to go hang with somebody, cuz right now, they’re just chillin’. Lol 😆@everybody
Imma have them run down a hall and bump into somebody. Whoever wants to talk to them can pick up the RP. first come, first serve. XD
Amidala
Fear makes its way through Ami’s body.…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Forum For Pictures of our Charries!! in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
Same with Ev. (Well, I’m still playing with him being a flirt. I’m not entirely sure yet) He only does it to get Ami’s attention really.
Tiny spoiler:
Actually, I have a really funny scene planned for book 2 in my trilogy and he loses his memory (temporarily) and doesn’t remember who Ami is. His flirty side comes out and it…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Forum For Pictures of our Charries!! in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
Durwin intrigues me!!
And Nyx!!!!! 😍 so cute!!!
The faceclaim you used for Alexander, I almost used for one of mine!
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Esther replied to the topic Forum For Pictures of our Charries!! in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
@felicity @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @starofthenorth @elishavet-pidyon @anyone-i-forgot
I love y’all charries!!!!!!!
They look absolutely awesome!!!
@godlyfantasy12, I have a feeling, that Arthur meeting Ev would be hilarious. Cuz I’m imagining that Arthur’s taller than Ev, (even tho Ev is 6’ 1’’ or 2’’) and that Ev would be jealou…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Woah… A lot has happened. Lol 😂
Ok, @godlyfantasy12, I have an idea. So, since Ev has such a temper, and Grimm is so protective, maybe I’ll have Ami and Ev find Paxton and Luna. Maybe they physically bump into each other. Ami helps Paxton up and starts talking to him, being her friendly self. But Grimm comes in at that point. Since he is pro…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @felicity @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings
So, I can’t post the next chapter(s) right now, bc there are some things in it I’ve been meaning to edit. But I will post it here later today!! 😄
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
Ev is so fun to write!
And yes, when I was writing this, i was nervous for Ami too! 😆 I wasn’t quite sure what was going to happen. Lol
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Esther replied to the topic Forum For Pictures of our Charries!! in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
Oh and thx for the feedback. 🙂
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