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@freedomwriter76

I just got home and I need to do the dishes so I can’t read this right now, but I will try to soon. (Another WIP? XD keep it up!)

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

This one will have to be short. I’m waiting to go to Church.

Mikkel

No use standing with the door cracked. They’d been noticed.

Yet no one had advanced on them…which wasn’t necessarily a good sign.

Fiddles. He’d accidentally bumped the door, trying to find the best position for his…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

They totally should. And do so without the other realizing it too.

@freedomwriter76

Haha! XD

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Viktor

Heart pounding, feet stumbling, Viktor listened with astonished ears to the voices filtering through Mikkel’s crack in the door.

Completely unrecognizable.

He swiped his hair off his forehead, combing it back with his nervous fingers.

“Guide us, Lord.”

Only Mikkel’s request kept…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

All right!

Alyona

From her place a top the garden wall, she could make out the three gardens, all free of gaurds.

Relief, sweet relief, swept through her like the harvest wind. She took a deep breath and glanced back.

If only Viktor could be here, safe as well.

Jocelyn had come over behind…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Okay, here goes!

Zlatan

A small measure of relief poured down his back, warming his heart and turning his eyes to liquid gold.

Nyx had one of his own group back, Crosshair had his son, Eva her…her…he quickly looked away, eyes soaring toward the roof.

Golden moons and sunshine,…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12

Whose turn is it?

@queen_of_alvastia

Ouch, yeah you may want to add him. Sounds like he needs a hug and a good church service.

Uh, not quite sure if that makes quite as much sense typed as it did in my head, but anyway.

@godlyfantasy12

Awww, Lynnie…

@godlyfantasy12

Yessss! That was hilarious. And hey, Ocran needs a little more humility anyway.

(Of course teasing November is fun. I have a couple in my other series, Alwin and Winifrith, and I am so looking forward to when they start getting teased about each other. XD like, it’s absurd, but I love it. XD and poor Alwin, he’s a little…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ah, poor dear. I wouldn’t be either. (I love those two together)

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Okay, y’all I think it’s time for a quick POV from Ocran…. Whether or not he actually comes on the scene, you know.

Ocran

Immer, a captain of his castle gaurd, stood at attention before Ocran’s desk. Sweat beaded on the man’s forehead, and his boots were spattered in mud and blood.

This…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

He’s adorable!

@freedomwriter76

Go ahead, as long as Godlyfantasy is fine with it. =)

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Vulkasin

Several bug sized guards scurried in the passage below. Vulkasin grinned, fighting off the urge to drop a neat little spitwad someone’s head.

He stepped across, offering assistance to anyone who needed it. Alyona had seemed a bit unsteady a moment ago. Come to think of it, Lynn was…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

And Viktor and Alya would be like: “A fellow Eirtan, finally!!!” XD

Leon does kinda look the part…. If it weren’t for his strange, WWII era clothing. XD

Well, Riker and Leon have to run into each other somehow. 🙂 Maybe this door could lead them right into each other.

@freedomwriter76

Ohh…why do we do this to our characters? *Sniff* I know, I know, it’s sorta the whole point of the story but…

*Sigh*

@whalekeeper

Now I feel sorry for Jackal, and while my opinion of a certain giant hasn’t exactly improved, the others have sunk rather farther.

(Please save Axel, and Jackal, and anyone else…THEY NEED FREEDOM! SET THE POOR PEOPLE FREE! Please?)

@freedomwriter76

Awwwww, it sounds like Jayden’s finally finding healing in that excerpt. And yes, so sweet.