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Koshka replied to the topic Y'ALLL!!!!! I started it…and I love this already!!! <3 Any thoughts? 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
AHHHH! I love it!
So, the normal human being part of me is horrified, but the history nerd author? She grinned through most of those chapters whispering “she got it right. She got it right!”
Although I am still a tad bit confused over their whole ‘still living in the same house as their father even though their Jews…’. this…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
I’ve been waiting for his elven flame since I first learned about it!!!! It was AWESOME!
Okay, so maybe I’m being a tad dramatic, but I did say I’ve been waiting a long time.
I can try to RP, only I don’t really know what to have anyone say or do, so I a little lost.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Well then, Erich, Almarrin, maybe you two should run into each other. Although, is Erich going to the club? If so Almarrin can wait, but if not…who’s going to keep the ‘winged brats’ distracted enough not to notice their brother’s gone?
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76Â @godlyfantasy12
I’m with you! *Cracks knuckles* Let’s go track them down.
Almarrin
The hall was quiet like a testing field right before the bomb blew. Or maybe more like the silence of the aftermath.
Avoiding notice, Almarrin slipped down the hall and vanished behind the office door. All was quiet on the other side.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Oops, poor fellow. I’d better hunt him down.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Ahh, gotcha. I just was suddenly wondering, “where are my characters again?” XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Oh, and is Inglor still with Luna?
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Okay, that will make more sense for her arc…and be even more wonderfully confusing for characters. XD
I think Elishavet set it up so you could show up whenever. =)
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Wow. Look what happens when I step off for a day. These were really fun to read through!
Eira is an Alve, although she has Forester blood too. Without an idea of who she is, she has been raised in an orphanage that doesn’t believe the Light exists, and that the Alven are mere fairy tales. She is taught first of all the Light, t…
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Jaybird replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @wilder-w
Winton
He set a box of plastic cutlery beside the space where the pizza would go. The fruit and vegetable tray was in the little fridge in the corner of his office. Everything was basically ready.
Chairs for the club members were set around a long table in the center of the room. The…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Sounds good to me! We will be having dinner soon, however, and church soon after that. (There’s a missionary friend of our family coming ; I’m sooo excited!)
So, I’ll go ahead and do a little one of Winton preparing for it.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Y'ALLL!!!!! I started it…and I love this already!!! <3 Any thoughts? 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
That’s a good part too. I did say it was ONE of my favorites…
I just like blowing stuff up. *Face palm* XD
But the one to one conversations are priceless!
Also, in that last one, I love the mildly creepy way you described Felix. *Shudder* 🙂
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Jaybird replied to the topic Y'ALLL!!!!! I started it…and I love this already!!! <3 Any thoughts? 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Ah, perfect! That was such a pleasure to read. I love these characters!
And their dynamic and descriptions are superb! I love seeing them interact.
The whole thing was really good, especially for a first draft. One of my favorites is the opening, but I have a soft spot for guerrilla warfare and resistance groups (should I have…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
With November? No! At least, not my guys. They’re fair enough to not expect everyone else to be completely open when they aren’t.
They will be curious, however, and curiosity mean they will try to find out more.
By the way, is Corvina still in the shadows?
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
I KNOOWWW! 😭 but poor November is in serious trouble!
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
By the way, Reúven’s “usual” is a quick, anonymous strike to a nervous shut down point. I thought it might give a decent way to clear off Hitchens for the moment, especially since I can’t see either of my boys, or any of the others in this group, standing still right then. XD
Also, I’m guessing…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 …definitely. @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
Viktor
The slug, Hitchens had his blade to Arabella’s throat. Viktor exchanged a wide-eyed glance with Reúven and unlooped his rod from his belt. Reúven had drawn his knife, and was quickly moving behind the man, his eyes glittering.
Then it happened. A wave of terror ripped t…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
I’m on. I’m actually stuck home sick right now, so I’ll be off and on.
I am considering Eira coming, not because she’s been technically abused, but to get some really sad ideas out of her head. For instance, she’s been raised to be agnostic.
Eira
A slight smile flickers across my face when s…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Eira
I stare at her for a long moment untill the mild shock wears off and my eyes drop back to the half eaten jello cup. “Astronomy.”
Stars. My hand itches to find the book in my backpack and loose myself among them, but I swallow the last glob and ask what a brother’s like. If she’s talking I don’t have to, and besides; I sort…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
They better let Paxton go, even if it’s like “well, at least it’ll keep him out of our way” although it is usually them in his way but……..
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