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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Yes indeed, poor, dear Viktor.
I don’t know either. I really want to see Kilied’s response…
It’s okay, I mean, Viktor doesn’t mind too much. Not for now.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Okay, I just had to give Viktor some movement.
And great job, y’all! I’m enjoying reading these so, do much.
Viktor
Vikor shifted uncomfortably, conscious of the stranger’s questioning gaze.
He didn’t know if it was his hands or something else about him that had piqued the other boy’s… What was it? Suspicion? Amusement? Irritation?
The…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Nevermind, it’s gone.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Oops! That was only part, do you want me to go ahead and add the rest?
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Vulkasin and Zlatan
His brother’s face looked to be stone, the expression which meant he wasn’t comfortable, although he had returned his blade to it’s scabbard.
Vulkasin laughed. He couldn’t help it really. Not with Zlatan acting a complete Desanik beside him (Military officer similar to a sergeant). At first he tried to…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Zlatan and Vulkasin
They stared at him each in a different version of confusion.
He must not have explained something. “Which passage do you think-”
A door a little farther down one corridor flew open with a bang and a bright flash shot out, landing before them. “I have arrived!” A cheery voice announced.
There stood a girl, her smile…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Yes! XD I think they figured that out pretty quick.
This next one would probably be a good place for them to meet up with someone, whether Sofia or Lyn and Nyx.
Vulkasin and Zlatan
November stared at the strip in his hands with something approaching horror.
Zlatan didn’t notice.
Vulkasin desperately tried not to laugh,…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Ocran
Ocran moved on down the passage, pausing now and again to wrap his wounded hand.
The filthy little beast.
He stopped at a window to clear his head in the fresh air.
They had escaped, again, and things were becoming strikingly familiar.
The Hawk had flown, and fledglings with him. Not even the news that the Hawk’s wife had died ever…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
That’s such a perfect description of Vulkasin! (And their marching rations, hahaha)
Now for my part…
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Sounds great to me!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Zlatan and Vulkasin
At the mention of food the lad’s eyes nearly doubled in size and Ara’s laugh sounded alongside a soft rumble. She smiled at Novembré. “I’m honestly not sure.”
Why didn’t I think of this? Zlatan glanced down the Corridor to the last light slit they had passed. Darkness. How long had it been?
Novembré had turned red again,…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
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Jaybird replied to the topic THE WORLDBUILDING THREAD in the forum Fantasy 4 years, 4 months ago
Learning languages can be really hard, but they sure do help for name inspiration!
But it doesn’t help when it’s all in the language itself. XD
I feel your pain.
For the reason I am replying to you is tgat I am learning Hebrew.
Now please note that that is present tense! 😉 I’m not very far in.
Sometimes looking up things…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Actually, yes! Here it is.
“@elishavet-pidyon OH BOI OCRAN BE MAAAAAD BRUH XD
Jocelyn & Nyx
”Maybe give me a bit more warning next time before TOSSING ME INTO THE AIR?!”
”Sorry, love.” Jocelyn chuckled. “Though your expression was priceless!”
Nyx pouted. “You could’ve filled me in!”
“Umm, when exactly?” She…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic I need help, please! in the forum Plotting 4 years, 4 months ago
Yes! (Why is it so hard to find the right words sometimes?) I shall store that phrasing up for next time. Thank you! =)
Oo, your books sounds good!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
I don’t believe so, and I should know as this is the ONE book I’ve actually managed to plot.
Well, that poem popped into my head. In truth my story isn’t even similar, at least as far as I know.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Thanks! This is SO MUCH FUN!!
Ocran
”Lord Governor?! Two titles in one?!” She gasped in apparent admiration, “How amazing is that?! Nyx! Did you hear that!”
The beast wasn’t paying her any mind, of course, and instead was fairly foaming at the mouth in rage.
She stroked it’s head.
“Ah, ah, now Nyx, do be nice! Is that anyw…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Vulkasin and Zlatan
Vulkasin watched his brother standing still in the corridor, his head cocked, listening, as if trying to tell were the blast had come from.
Nowhere near. But a moment later there was something else, something at the edge of his hearing, teasing him. Vulkasin shook his head, it must just be some ringing in his…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Just going to make this clear, ZLATAN DOESN’T DIE!
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