Anatra

@godlyfantasy12

Ah, yes. That would make sense.

Poor Nyx! XD

So… Would he and Alyona get stuck together? Or Alyona and Lynn?

Awwwww. ❤️ That would be an honor. 😉

Oh, the dear little fuzz ball.

@hullofellowhumans

Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! I’m Koshka, and I write historical-nonmagical-fantasy. And poetry, flash fiction, ect.

Interesting! I don’t read dystopian myself as I haven’t been able to find one that didn’t make me ill.

Now for questions:

Do you like hot tea? If so do you prefer it with cream?

What are your favorite…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Absolutely! I’d actually love to separate the siblings again, since I’m playing with it being a huge plot point in my book.

So… Maybe Alyona gets caught?

And Viktor is with the group still?

And they get to see another part of him. XD

This would also add pressure to find Ocran before…..?

But I don’t know. What do y’all think?

@godlyfantasy12

That sounds good to me!

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

By the way, the Vulk brothers speak with a rough Russian accent.

@elishavet-pidyon

The brothers

“Let’s review what we know.”

Vulkasin’s groan was cut short by a look. His brother was in high order all right. More plans.

“Ze Lord of zis place ran into Lyn, and isn’t too happy about it. Ve need to be careful…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Sounds good!

@godlyfantasy12

I think we should meet up with the others. If the numbers are too much at the moment, Alyona and Viktor can get separated from the group and rejoin before the Ocran Battle.

But I do want them all to meet @freedomwriter76 ‘s and @koshka ‘s characters.

This is fantabulous!

By the way, the far building Viktor keeps referring to…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka

XD Lynn is great; I love her. XD

Viktor

“Hay, Vick.”

What had that blonde girl called him? Because he had to assume she meant him.

Not that he minded nicknames, but he just liked to know to whom a sentence was directed. And why Vick? He’d been called many names in his life, Little Screamer, Ami, Young Mynclais, and the…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Thanks! I love it too!

I think they need to meet each other, then learn who Ocran is, than we can have the ‘battle’. XD

@freedomwriter76

I love how you’re writing his this way. It makes me feel right at home.

Mikkel

Face-palmed? 

Mikkel slowly brought his hand to his forehead.

Face-to-palm.

“Yes. I’ve never seen an officer hit himself.” The rifle strap twisted back and forth in his hand. “I’m sorry ma’am.” He staightened his helmet. “But sir, you grew up on a farm?”

@godlyfantasy12

Zlatan

“Good. Ve need to move.”

He turned, searching for the group.

Here was Vulkasin, gazing longingly at the stone wall. There’s Arabella, looking to the stars.

And Novembré standing stock still, wide eyed and open faced.

The brothers shared a look.

@freedomwriter76

Mikkel

Ezra smacked himself full in the face. Strange. This officer hit himself, not his soldiers.

“You’re right. And, forgive me if I’m intruding, but, how do you know castles so well?”

Oh, that.

“I spent much of my childhood at my Uncle’s estate and the Squirey.”

Eyebrows rose.

“It’s a court boarding school”

@freedomwriter76

Mikkel

A bed chamber?

“Sir…” Mikkel pulled off his helmet. The chin strap needed straightened. “If this were my castle, I wouldn’t be too pleased to find strangers inside the walls, much less the bed chambers.” he ran his fingers through his hair. “But we should be nearing the servants quarters by now, seeing the lack of…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yeah, I understand that. I may be doing the same thing, perhaps even killing a MC, the father of another MC. And maybe another MC’s best friend.

*Weeps*

AND THEY’RE MY FAVORITE CHARACTERS!!

But that is a nice(ish) way to do it. I love Riker writing Leon’s son.

If the best friend character does, he goes in his sleep/coma, but…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka

Hi!!! Being a bit late is fine. Or at least I hope so, since I’ve been know to be a little tardy at my responses. 😉

Viktor

The world had grown soft with the night. Seas of stars rolled over head, and tender leaves beneath. Viktor tipped back his head and let the song of the heavens fill his soul.

“Praise the Lord of…[Read more]

@keilah-h @e-m-trepke @power

Okay then… 🙂 I might as well just add both of the charries because I’m interested on how they’ll all interact with each other. If it gets to be too much, I’ll take one or two out!

So there’s Molly, who’s a runaway slave and has a fake/mechanical leg (made by Everett) that extends from her right knee down. She is…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Aww…now I really may cry.

I love broken characters! They grip me deep, like no healthy one can.

To be completely honest I sort of liked him more than Riker at first. Now they’re pretty even.

@freedomwriter76

WHAT!? HOW COULD YOU?

*SOB*

but that’s good. Very good.

*Sniffle*

@freedomwriter76

YOU KILLED LEON!?! *Bursts into tears*

How could you?*sniff*

I liked him…*gasp*

And you just BUMPED HIM OFF! *Sob*

Good scene. Thank you for ending it on a higher note.

*Sniff*

@keilah-h

I know practically nothing about star wars, so as far as I’m concerned he could be your own creation. =)

@freedomwriter76

You’re fine! I’m actually working today, so I haven’t had time to catch up till now.

(Poor boys.)

Mikkel

Cold relief poured down Mikkel’s neck.

“No, sir. I haven’t been the most, er… Thank you for mentioning…[Read more]