Anatra

@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Zlatan

Eva stood in the middle of a room. Zlatan quickly wiped clean his blade, stuffing the oil cloth back into it’s place. He sheathed his sword before coming into the room.

A golden fluff ball curled up in her arms.

Nyx.

Oy this fox was not happy to see him.

Zlatan closed the door behind him,…[Read more]

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Viktor

The stair has been dark, crowded, filled with bloodthirst.

He had tried his best, but his best wasn’t much. And as even as he hated to admit it, everything he’d been taught in fighting had fled at the sight of the dogs.

Maybe if he’d been older, more weapon wise, he could have held the…[Read more]

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Zlatan

His sword was messy now, but he didn’t stop to clean it even though the sounds of pursuit had died to a patter.

Let the rest to have made it to safety.

Zlatan kept climbing stairs, checking rooms. Two levels. Three.

Vulkasin

Lyn and Altona stared at him, worry plain on their…[Read more]

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You guys have no idea how THRILLED, how SHISHCOMBOODLED I am about this. Seriously, I’ve never written either of my characters in these situations.

Alyona

Seven feet of young man rolled onto the roof. Alyona’s mind, still trapped in the rooms below them, struggled to comprehend what she was…[Read more]

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Sure! XD

Y’all are awesome.

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Mikkel

Riker was fading, something more than just a scraped up forehead was to blame.

“Hey!” Mikkel lightly slapped him. “Stay with me.”

Riker blinked, his eyes hazey and dilated. Probably slightly concussed.

Great. Oswald, what do I do?

Oswald’s gone.

Mikkel dragged in a breath, shoving…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Good job! As its only first draft, I swap out all ‘w’s and ‘th’s as they aren’t a sound in Russian.

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Zlatan

Was the man crazy?!

No, he was an officer, just like Zlatan himself. First in attack last in retreat. In better circumstances two officers would both give all the information…[Read more]

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Zlatan

The bay of a war dog. One small mark on time. Instant chaos in the ranks.

Hateful chaos and disorder.

The Desanik in Zlatan took over.

The tower door had been cleared, their paths somehow traced. By the sound at least half a dozen guards were already inside.

No time left.…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Sounds good! I love it!

Yeah, that makes sense. I hoped it would help separate. Poor Nyx. And Arabella.

There are times I think she, Viktor, and/or Alyona could have a nice long talk…

And now Alyona is running to the roof… Or not. We’ll see.

If she didn’t, Viktor’s gonna be furious with worry.

I love him.

Soooo….

I more than started getting ready for the guards to attack. 😬 XD

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

The groups sound pretty good, Alyona and Lynn would be rather fun, one they get to know each other. Alyona is quiet, but she isn’t exactly timid. Outgoing natures remind her of her little sister, and she’s happy with that.

Alyona would be interesting with anyone, although she may have to open up…[Read more]

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*Comes flying into the tower window*

I’m back!!!!

*Lands in a crouch, cloak slid over one shoulder, green wool against a blue linen kirtle. Soft fabric on stone*

Because we can do all things in our imaginations. (Including owning said 10th century garb. *Sigh*)

Anyway, I have returned from my…[Read more]

@queen_of_alvastia

As far as edits go, it was confusing which character you were speaking for as the POV switches around. Are you writing omniscient view?

@queen_of_alvastia

Is he okay?

IS HE?!

I need to knoooow!!!!!!

@queen_of_alvastia

*Quiet voice in corner*

What just happened?

@queen_of_alvastia

Um, what just happened?! O.O

That was interesting, and it definitely had me hooked while reading it. I’ll have to think over any edits etc., but for now, that’s pretty good.

@freedomwriter76

@godlyfantasy12

Thanks, y’all! You’re really encouraging, and I’m glad you like it!

Yes, she is a bit hopeless, she knows deep in her heart that she’s headed for spiritual bankruptcy, but she’s seen so much already that she’s almost dead inside. It has a lot to do with the certain kind of things she’s involved in. Nasty, ugly…[Read more]

So, for tags! (Let’s see if I can remember them.) If I didn’t tag you, don’t feel like you can’t say anything, or if you know if someone who might like to help, then feel free to take them.

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@godlyfantasy12

You’re welcome! This is my favorite type of book research too, so thank you!