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Koshka replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @queen_of_alvastia
Here’s right part of Mikkel’s all-is-lost beat, right before dark-night-of-the-soul.
Fog swirled around him, penetrated by the dull sharpness of pain.
He tried to push it away, but it only gripped him tighter, searing his bones. Mikkel groaned.
Voices echoed through the…
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Jaybird replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Ahhh, I love!!! Especially with how it blends into your books and your character’s faith/ the allegory. It’s perfect!
So, something a little funny: in my books, I didn’t want them to call their parents just mom and dad either, (I actually don’t even call my own parents that. It’s Mama and Daddy to me.) and since my love of…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Howdy! 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 4 years ago
Greetings and salutations! Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen. I’m called Elishavet around here, and I write mostly realistic early medieval fantasy.
That’s awesome that y’all are sisters! I have some siblings on here too, but it’s a secret, so shhh. 😉
Anyway, see you around! I have to go: dinner is calling.
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Jaybird replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Ok, first off,this is a wonderful idea, and I will be joining in. Literally, this is fantastic!
That scene is sooo interesting. I like Ara, Ganesh, and her parents. (And sympathize with her. Oh, life is so awkward at times…)
She calls her father אבא? I love it!
I really enjoyed your scene too! Alwin and Jar…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 4 years ago
Greetings, and welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! I’m called Elishavet around here and I write mostly (key word) realistic early medieval fantasy and children’s church material (coauthored with siblings).
So, for some MORE questions, I’ll try to keep it brief.
- If you could speak any language other than your first, what would it be?
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Jaybird replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 years ago
Thank you! And I really liked yours, especially the one where Natasha insinuates they stole a car. XD
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Jaybird replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 years ago
Thank you! I’m so glad.
She and Picket meet in Ember Rising.
We were totally doing the same until we met Wheazy. Just so you know.😉 But Weezie and him are so sweet and fun together, and later on in the series, he really comes to depend on her, and her on him.And yes, she’s a lot of trouble. XD
Yes! Helmer’s awesome.
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Koshka replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 years ago
YES, she is! And also yes, you first meet her in Ember Rising.
I still haven’t read all of Ember Falls. You know, that one part. *Sob*I have a friend who was still Pemma, but she’s not so sure now. *Shrug* They all develope a bit in the last couple books. (Reason I’m one of those rare people who prefer Green Embers to all…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 years ago
AHHHH! THOSE ARE AWESOME!
Wheazy is hilarious! She’s Helmer’s niece. She’s a slave in First Warre (and is still soooo like her uncle). When they first meet she thinks he’s a trespasser and tries to shoot Pick.
I used to be totally Picket&Emma, but by the end of the books those two are like, brother and…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 4 years ago
Why, hello to you too! I’m Koshka, a writer of non-magical medieval-fantasy, and other stuff.
And now, Askthenewbequestions!
- What is your least favorite animal?
- Would you prefer to own a horse the rest of your life (you pick the breed) or ride a dragon for a day (again, you pick the type)?
- What is your favorite character’s hair…
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Jaybird replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 years ago
I love Helmer… Almost everyone does.
(And this’ll be the last for now, since you’re probably all going, “What in the world??”)
Helmer: You took my words literally, didn’t you?
Picket(rocking cradle with foot): Of course, sir. You would have done the same for me.
Helmer stares at Picket then slowly shakes head: I could hardly have married your niece.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 years ago
Because these two are hilarious together…
(Oh, and I can’t remember how to spell Louise’s name…)
Emma and Wheazy are working in hospital, Weazy sees Heather and Smalls working in another room.
Wheazy: Why don’t they get married?
Emma: They have to wait for his coronation.
Wheazy(snorts): Of course.
Emma: Well, you and Picket barely waited…
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Jaybird replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 years ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
Oh! Those are awesome! I love them all.
So, these aren’t from my own books, but then, neither are some of yours, so…
Anyway, they’re basically the same, only I made them myself (eg. Not on a website). And they may depend on whether you’ve read the Green Ember series or not, but then, I know almost nothing…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Another SCENE!!!! Any thoughts y'all? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Oof. That’s hard, but I love the way he shows Riker Jezyk’s medal. (Bookishly, you know.)
*Weeps inwardly*
Hans is worse than Mrs. Noris, than Miraz, than Ouster Will, than Vermilion, than Garten Longreader – actually no, those last two might actually be worse.
BUT THAT’S NO EXCUSE, MR. HANS.
Also, I really like the way…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Viktor
That had been close. Viktor shuddered as the war hounds sniffed under the door.(by the way, these dogs are bit like very wolfish mastiffs with a bay between a wolf’s and a bloodhound’s. They are trained to hunt, fight, and kill, rather like the war dogs of the conquistadors.)
Then one of…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Strange Idea For Drafting?? (How Do I Title This XD) in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Ah, fun!
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Koshka replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 years ago
Not good at all. Think of a medieval form of Hans who is also extremely manipulative. Calm almost kind demeanor, black heart. If Zlatan and Riker get to talk they can compare the two.
Uh, yeah that probably wouldn’t end well. For anyone.
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Koshka replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 years ago
Sounds like he would go rather well with Yarvoj. *Shudder*
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Koshka replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 years ago
That’s awful.
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Koshka replied to the topic Strange Idea For Drafting?? (How Do I Title This XD) in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
It’s my brother’s bearded dragon, named Sir Spike. (We have this thing in our family for knighting pets…)
Neither could I.
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