Anatra

Zlatan and Vulkasin

Zlatan’s left shoulder ached. He sighed and shifted the weight of his shield. I don’t know what to do.

He could hear his brother’s even steps behind him, and then a moment later at his side. He glanced up at his twin. Vulkasin’s yellow-green eyes were flashing bright with excitement. How can he like this sort of th…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Yay! Its Nyx and Lyn! I was hoping. =)

@godlyfantasy12

Vulkasin and Zlatan

Ara was hiding a smile. Vulkasin supposed Zlatan could have chosen a better name, but then, there were worse.

“I’m afraid not…Though, I’m guessing from the way you describe him, you aren’t on good terms?” She glanced at Novembré who seemed a bit red about the ears. Vulkasin grinned, then wiped it off under hi…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Go ahead! You could have her interact with Sofia, if you wanted.

@emilysf

Hmmm, if you could write this well it could be powerful, but…hmm. My brain may have exploded over this one. Here are a few questions:

Is your MC dying just because he won’t defend himself/kill someone, or because he sees that Anti isn’t ready to die/has something he needs to do. Obviously someone willing to murder isn’t ready to die,…[Read more]

Worldbuilding is fun, difficult and frustrating sometimes yes, but we didn’t actually think this would be easy, did we?

*Sigh of dismay*

I do enjoy it though, especially being able to create my own solar/calender system, because why be boring? Hint; if you’re wanting to show a huge rift between two cultures using separate calenders helps. In…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Zlatan and Vulkasin

Vulkasin wasn’t alone. Zlatan’s golden eyes narrowed as he studied the girl a moment. Brown hair and eyes, worried face. She stared at him as if he would eat her.

Novembré stepped out behind him. “So, you’ll help me then?”

The girls face flashed with light at her sudden smile. “November!”

The lad’s face…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Sure! That’s fine with me.

By the way, I’m also considering adding in another character, considering the lack of girls. It’d either be one of Viktor’s sisters (Alyona) or an MC from the other series I’m plotting (Winifrith).

But I might not, we’ll just see.

@godlyfantasy12

Thanks! All the characters on here are great.

Yay! Thank you. They sure are fascinating things, these themes.

@godlyfantasy12

And November and Ara are awesome! I keep laughing with every new VP of his.

@godlyfantasy12

Thanks! I will admit I may have used my two best MCs, but their also my favorite, so…and Vulkasin really does need development.

Vulkasin

The girl had come to a halt a few feet away. She looked as frightened and out of place as the lad inside the armory.

“H-hello. I…” Her voice trailed off.

Then she took a deep breath and looked Vulkasin straight in the eye, a feat for anyone considering his height.

“My name’s Arabella Fabel.” She dipped her head politely. “I’m…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I like long ones!  =)

Zlatan

In an instant November had changed from a fumbling bundle of nerves to a lad staring at Zlatan with a look ready to tear down walls. “Have you seen Arabella? She’s my…She’s my friend.”

Zlatan’s smile returned. The lad could be a fighter after all. “Neh, I ‘ave not seen any living soul ‘ere beside y…[Read more]

@denali-christianson

WORLD BUILDING!!

I’ll try not to rant too much.

I love world building, and the great news is that I have two WIPs with two very different worlds to form. Huzzah!

And I get to use them as excuses to read random articles on the formation of the Baltic/slav tribes, whether the Saxons used slings, and what kind of bread was…[Read more]

@maryg3

Themes are so neat! I love finding little hidden lessons in the books I read.

Now, adding them isn’t always quite so easy, and I know I have a long way to go before my stories properly portray their themes. (I have to write them first, for one… 😉 )

But I agree with the others: multiple themes are fantastic and best when they all work…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Zlatan

The lad was obviously in an emotional breakdown. He was pulling his hair and jabbering.

“Point is, I..ah, really didn’t mean to do any of this! It just kinda…happens.” the lad grimaced. “So…if you could…not mention this? Or…umm…not lock me away for all eternity?” He smiled but his eyes were still terrified.

Zlata…[Read more]

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Hello @unsung welcome to the Kingdom!!!! *waves* We’re SO thrilled to have you here!!! I’m Issabelle, but feel free to call me Is or Issa or any other nickname you come up with – it’s much quicker to spell, lol. And fantasy is one of the best genres ever!! *high fives*