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@godlyfantasy12

Yes, yes, yes!!! That’s perfect.

Ocran (totally needs a dramatic musical score)

Boom, buddoom, doom, doom!

*Nose laugh*

Anywayzees,

Ocran

The noon sun had begun to make it’s way off the height of the heavens and looked in through the high, narrow window. Ocran paused to study the stone work in it’s revealing light.

Finally satisfied, he stepped away and on down the hallway.…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Exactly!!! XD

Plus, having Viktor right here, kinda represents how the kingdom of Eirtan is continuing right under his very nose. Bwahahaha!

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @everyone-else

Crazy idea: what if the castle belongs to Ocran!?

@godlyfantasy12

Ocran

Ocran strode down the length of the corridor, halting before a narrow door.

Walking helped take his mind off the rumors.

Oh, the foolish people! Did they think he didn’t hear their murmurings? Their whispered hopes?

He spat.

They aught to know better, the Eagle had fallen, the Hawk was crippled. The ashes of the heirs…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Or nicer. He’s less two-faced, and only encourages people to betray and warp each other after his great success in the first because the latter failed for him.

If that made sense.

It is interesting though, Zlatan’s story is set up a little different as although there is a ‘villian’ who initiates most of his problems, Zlatan is his own antagonist.

His name btw, means ‘Golden one’.

@godlyfantasy12

Aw, poor girl. That does sound like a good plot point.

Do I do that? Nah, only have major ‘what is truth?’ and ‘what have I done?’ issues planned for my MCs, so nothing overly tramatic. XD

@godlyfantasy12

Wow…she definitely sounds interesting. Let’s give it a try, shall we?

Although, my “villain” is around 30 years of age, and a bit of the Bonifer Squoonish type, just less nice. He’s the military governor of the Dorwain province of Eirtan.

Just that last sentence makes me want to call the eagles.

*Realizes that only makes…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I noticed those color combinations had some sort of effect on her. The puzzle pieces are clicking.

@godlyfantasy12

And cheers for skirt-girls!(being one myself) I’m relishing that.

@godlyfantasy12

She’s great!

Oohh, so that’s why Ara was so flumuxed by Zlatan’s black hair. Hmmm, many those two should meet. Zlatan with charcoal black hair, golden eyes, and a mildly-pessimistic-yet-somehow-idealistic nature, and your dear antagonist Corvina whith her whole set of problems. Especially if Elishavet’s villian gets in too.

This…[Read more]

@denali-christianson

Welcome elf! *deep curtsey* I am Koshka, a cat, though I believe we may have already met.

However you have not met she-who-I-am-also, Limmeth, a five foot wood elf.

*Steps out from behind tree*

*Glances about gripping longbow*

*Pulls hood low and darts up tree*

I write historical fantasy and poetry with the occasional…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I have a villian, a horrible villian who was literally inspired from a history book, but he may not be a good, ah, antagonist for this castle, as I know practically nothing of his character besides the stone and ice shell he has apparently become. No, he can never be redeemed. In fact I believe he is executed in the end for war…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I too feel that I have spoken much on this thread. However, I concur: we need a villain.

My “villains” are a high ranking prince (official, not son of a king) and a couple vague ideas concerning generational curses, addictions, fears, and the father of lies.

I doubt any of the latter would work, but maybe the first may in a…[Read more]

Ok course, at this point I have no idea what to write…so you have any?

@godlyfantasy12

I have time!

*A soft moan drifts from the court yard*

Kilied, where are you? We neeeeed you!

@denali-christianson @godlyfantasy12

Definitely. I’m still waiting to see how the courtyard sense continues.

@r-m-archer

Isn’t it?

They are interesting. So, those particular cultures are mostly concentrated in the VoyageFolk. They dress like the Norse and the Rus, speak like the Rus, and live like the Northmen in that they avoid living on land. At all. (with some of my own invention to blend them all.)

I have found it intriguing to study (ha, ha, that…[Read more]