Anatra

Zlatan and Vulkasin

They stared at him each in a different version of confusion.

He must not have explained something. “Which passage do you think-”

A door a little farther down one corridor flew open with a bang and a bright flash shot out, landing before them. “I have arrived!” A cheery voice announced.

There stood a girl, her smile…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Yes! XD I think they figured that out pretty quick.

This next one would probably be a good place for them to meet up with someone, whether Sofia or Lyn and Nyx.

Vulkasin and Zlatan

November stared at the strip in his hands with something approaching horror.

Zlatan didn’t notice.

Vulkasin desperately tried not to laugh,…[Read more]

Ocran

Ocran moved on down the passage, pausing now and again to wrap his wounded hand.

The filthy little beast.

He stopped at a window to clear his head in the fresh air.

They had escaped, again, and things were becoming strikingly familiar.

The Hawk had flown, and fledglings with him. Not even the news that the Hawk’s wife had died ever…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

That’s such a perfect description of Vulkasin! (And their marching rations, hahaha)

Now for my part…

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Sounds great to me!

Zlatan and Vulkasin

At the mention of food the lad’s eyes nearly doubled in size and Ara’s laugh sounded alongside a soft rumble. She smiled at Novembré. “I’m honestly not sure.”

Why didn’t I think of this? Zlatan glanced down the Corridor to the last light slit they had passed. Darkness. How long had  it been?

Novembré had turned red again,…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Amen!

It’s awful when one’s reply just vanishes.

@godlyfantasy12

Learning languages can be really hard, but they sure do help for name inspiration!

But it doesn’t help when it’s all in the language itself. XD

I feel your pain.

For the reason I am replying to you is tgat I am learning Hebrew.

Now please note that that is present tense! 😉 I’m not very far in.

Sometimes looking up things…[Read more]

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Actually, yes! Here it is.

“@elishavet-pidyon OH BOI OCRAN BE MAAAAAD BRUH XD

Jocelyn & Nyx

”Maybe give me a bit more warning next time before TOSSING ME INTO THE AIR?!”

”Sorry, love.” Jocelyn chuckled. “Though your expression was priceless!”

Nyx pouted. “You could’ve filled me in!”

“Umm, when exactly?” She…[Read more]

@emilysf

Yes! (Why is it so hard to find the right words sometimes?) I shall store that phrasing up for next time. Thank you! =)

Oo, your books sounds good!

@godlyfantasy12

I don’t believe so, and I should know as this is the ONE book I’ve actually managed to plot.

Well, that poem popped into my head. In truth my story isn’t even similar, at least as far as I know.

@godlyfantasy12

Thanks! This is SO MUCH FUN!!

Ocran

”Lord Governor?! Two titles in one?!” She gasped in apparent admiration, “How amazing is that?! Nyx! Did you hear that!”

The beast wasn’t paying her any mind, of course, and instead was fairly foaming at the mouth in rage.

She stroked it’s head.

“Ah, ah, now Nyx, do be nice! Is that anyw…[Read more]

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Vulkasin and Zlatan

Vulkasin watched his brother standing still in the corridor, his head cocked, listening, as if trying to tell were the blast had come from.

Nowhere near. But a moment later there was something else, something at the edge of his hearing, teasing him. Vulkasin shook his head, it must just be some ringing in his…[Read more]

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Just going to make this clear, ZLATAN DOESN’T DIE!

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Because…

It’s a story the Maker has always told

And the story, my child, is true.

(Armulyn, Royal Bard of the Shining Isle From chapter 96, “The Former Fangs Have Passed Away.”)

*Weeps*

That’s why I love this character.

@godlyfantasy12

HI!! *Returns hugs and hands you a chocolate eclair* Aww, thank you, I’ll tell them!

Oh Zlatan, you golden heart. Each of those lashes paid for a child you set free. You knew the price for what you did, but didn’t know it was already paid for you.

Uh, anyway…

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Poor November!!

I think the scene is dramatic and highly interesting. Obviously, there is a lot going on in the background. I think the dialogue is very good, and definitely has my curiosity triggered.

(Random, but if you ever want good examples of verbal abuse in books, I don’t know if you’ve read it or would be interested, but…[Read more]

@emilysf

Its awesome!

Ah, that sounds good.

(You may ask, but I won’t tell!) Hmm, similar thing happened to me, but I didn’t read it, I had most of the plotline explained to me by a darling sibling. =|Although I most likely wouldn’t have read it untill I understood the series; I may be a bit picky.

Oh dear. I just read over how I rephrased my…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ok! XD yeah, I almost went back and added more, but I didn’t want to clog the gears.

Ahem.

Ocran

There she was. The impertinent young girl with her nasty creature.

The girl, Jocelyn or whatever it was, smiled up at him, her teeth glowing bright in the light of the torches.

What was she getting at? She aught to be on her knees…[Read more]

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Zlatan and Vulkasin

Ara rose and dusted off her skirt. She seemed to have recovered. “We don’t want to be any trouble.”

Zlatan sighed. “If zees Corvina is bad enough her presence brings dreams in daylight (he is actually referring to PTSD), it looks like she’s already trouble.”

His brother laughed from where he leaned against…[Read more]