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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @emilysf @koshka
I’m sorry I haven’t responded. We’ve been busy preparing for like, four different things coming up. Although I’ve started a reply twice, neither were finished.
So! Here goes.
Alyona
Thankfully, the lady took it. She looked much better off wrapped in thick wool.
Alyona knew what a sacrifice it was for her…[Read more]
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Jean Coul replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Would you like to go next??
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Jean Coul replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Ah, alright! 🙂
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
Zlatan and Vulkasin
“She?” once again the conversation had shifted to that silent third person. Nyx.
Apparently the fox answered, because Ara turned to Victor and Alyona. “Any idea who she is?”
The siblings glanced at each other. “Ah.” Victor slipped something glinting into his belt. His mantle was…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
I don’t know. I think they’re about to run into the other group just now, but after that, who knows?
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Jean Coul replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Everett
Everett worked his jaw as he weighed his options. He was starving and dehydrated, and exhaustion was creeping up on him. Perhaps this was one of those times it didn’t matter whether he could trust people or not. Did he have a choice?
He tried to remember whether he had left a dagger in his satchel or not,…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @koshka
Ok, so now my characters are in an interesting predicament, as I’m trying to get a former hand on both of them.
This may get most interesting.
Alyona
“I… I … don’t. I’m…” the stranger fumbled for words, becoming less formidable by the second. A draft blew down the passage causing Alya’s light to dance and the…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
I’m sorry y’all. I just found time to actually sit down and write.
Vulkasin
Apparently Lyn had as much a desire to kill them all as his Endurance Instuktor. The older Vulk’s voice kept calling back to him, Run till you drop, and v’en you do remember, I’m be’ind you. So keep going.
But Lyn was ahead…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Okay! I do kind of want Alyona and Viktor to join the group again. Partially because there may be some interesting potential yet to be explored there, and also because I almost want to see what would happen if my protagonists run into my Villain. As far as I know, they never do in the books. Or rather, when they do, it’s like…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
So this is weird and random, but could I introduce another character? Zlatan and Vulkasin will most likely be disappearing soon (I’m not sure when, but I’m ready for a change), and I’d like it to be seamless. He’s a fox, and I think I’d leave him that way.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Of course!
Alyona Mynclais, second MC/central side character
3 cubits in height. XD okay, maybe that’s a little bookish. I’m still world building y’all!
So, 5′ in height, with dark hair and eyes, she is twelve at this point in the books.
I haven’t taken her personality test yet, but this is what I know. She is loyal to her…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 4 years, 3 months ago
Wowsers. =)
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Yes, the castle has basically come under the government of my villain, who may show up again soon. So, in a way, my characters “know” more about this castle than anyone else… except they don’t, because I didn’t make this castle. 😉
Alyona and Viktor could and probably would show you to the kitchens. They know their way around here…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 4 years, 3 months ago
Those look awesome (though I have absolutely no idea what the Council of Bust is)!
I found a song for Mitchel! And I think I’m changing his name to Mikkel, and his sister may not be the other MC of this book, but that book is the last in the series, so I still have plenty of time to figure them out. XD
Anyway, his song…[Read more]
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Jean Coul replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Sorry for the late response!!! 🙂
Everett
“Judging from your question,” Feather asked, “you don’t happen to be the castle’s owner or know who it is?”
Everett forced himself to stop glaring at Rinzler and look at the girl instead, but the guy’s grouchy voice still rang through his head– if I hadn’t already re…[Read more]
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Trahia the Minstrel replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
So … how does this work? Do we just insert things from our characters’ POVs from our own stories? Sorry, I haven’t been on KP in a while, so I’m late to the party.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @koshka
Bwahahaha! I love how all these characters interact. XD
Alyona
A gasp leapt into her mouth. This person wanted to help them?
A mere glance showed her to be between Viktor and herself in height, but this wasn’t what struck Alyona.
The girl was dressed in rags. Brightly dyed rags, but still not very adequate.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Age Gap in the forum Characters 4 years, 3 months ago
I’m popping back on here to clarify; I was thinking of later in these characters lives. Like, they become close friends during the series, and sometime later, when Paxton is older, the marriage idea enters the horizon.
And I’m someone who has avoided any sort of romance in my book’s, as I wanted Christian literature without twitter-pated…[Read more]
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