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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Ouch, yeah you may want to add him. Sounds like he needs a hug and a good church service.
Uh, not quite sure if that makes quite as much sense typed as it did in my head, but anyway.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Awww, Lynnie…
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Yessss! That was hilarious. And hey, Ocran needs a little more humility anyway.
(Of course teasing November is fun. I have a couple in my other series, Alwin and Winifrith, and I am so looking forward to when they start getting teased about each other. XD like, it’s absurd, but I love it. XD and poor Alwin, he’s a little…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Ah, poor dear. I wouldn’t be either. (I love those two together)
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Okay, y’all I think it’s time for a quick POV from Ocran…. Whether or not he actually comes on the scene, you know.
Ocran
Immer, a captain of his castle gaurd, stood at attention before Ocran’s desk. Sweat beaded on the man’s forehead, and his boots were spattered in mud and blood.
This…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
He’s adorable!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Go ahead, as long as Godlyfantasy is fine with it. =)
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Vulkasin
Several bug sized guards scurried in the passage below. Vulkasin grinned, fighting off the urge to drop a neat little spitwad someone’s head.
He stepped across, offering assistance to anyone who needed it. Alyona had seemed a bit unsteady a moment ago. Come to think of it, Lynn was…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
And Viktor and Alya would be like: “A fellow Eirtan, finally!!!” XD
Leon does kinda look the part…. If it weren’t for his strange, WWII era clothing. XD
Well, Riker and Leon have to run into each other somehow. 🙂 Maybe this door could lead them right into each other.
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Koshka replied to the topic Another SCENE!!!! Any thoughts y'all? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Ohh…why do we do this to our characters? *Sniff* I know, I know, it’s sorta the whole point of the story but…
*Sigh*
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Koshka replied to the topic Scene (& Explanation) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Now I feel sorry for Jackal, and while my opinion of a certain giant hasn’t exactly improved, the others have sunk rather farther.
(Please save Axel, and Jackal, and anyone else…THEY NEED FREEDOM! SET THE POOR PEOPLE FREE! Please?)
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Jaybird replied to the topic Another SCENE!!!! Any thoughts y'all? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Awwwww, it sounds like Jayden’s finally finding healing in that excerpt. And yes, so sweet.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Scene (& Explanation) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
It’s pretty good! I really enjoyed reading that just now. It’s very interesting.
But does Axel get free? Also, do they have to fight to the death? Does he die in the end?
And I don’t really like the giants either, even though they can be rather funny.
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Koshka replied to the topic Greetings friends! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 11 months ago
Aw, thank you! That’s not a picture of my cat, it just went with the alias so well.
Huzzah! There aren’t a whole lot of Christian non-magical fantasy.
I’d love to hear more about them! Which is your current main project? What’s your protagonist like? What’s the setting?
Hehe, dangerous questions. Never know when I might stop.…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Greetings friends! in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 11 months ago
Greetings, and welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! I’m called Elishavet around here, and I also mostly write realistic medieval fantasy, and a bunch of random stuff.
Your WIPs sound most intriguing, but especially your trilogy. I’m mildly partial to trilogies, because I still have the idea that my first WIP is a trilogy…. Even though…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Inspo Exchange in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
This one’s pretty awful, but my twin and I were laughing waayyy to hard over it.

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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Sooo……….A quick warning and explanation.
The warning, You would not believe how many triggers Viktor has had in the last 24 hours! Things will get stressful if he remembers something more than usual.
And as the explanation, Since I haven’t developed Eishlagair enough to use anything…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Scene (& Explanation) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
I really don’t like those giants. Even Doug. Especially Doug.
(And Axel does get free eventually right?)
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Go right ahead!
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Jaybird replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 11 months ago
Awwwww, that is SO sweet! And sad. I love it.
Should I do one for Davan? (Viktor’s older brother who was stillborn) Grayson’s collage is making me think of him.
And because it also gave me random inspiration, here’s a bit from my little side stories.
 “We’ll name him Davan.” Amicai said softly, his voice crushed in grief.…
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