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Koshka replied to the topic So…my draft has finally started…and I'd like some thoughts so far! 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
YES. The worst thing we could do would be to forget. I agree that it does need written about, and I am certainly still waiting for more. Just…*sigh*
Mwahaha… character conflict.
Ooo! I can’t wait!
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Koshka replied to the topic So…my draft has finally started…and I'd like some thoughts so far! 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
…and now we enter the reason I don’t typically study WWII.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @wilder-w
(I think I’m going to have to do a whole post outlining different traditions of Eirtan, because they keep on growing!)
Winton
“Liora! Come on in. You too, Viktor, we’re so glad to have you.
The two young people sat down quietly as Winton turned to the whole group.
“I think it’s…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @wilder-w
AND I DIDN’T FINISH IT!!! Okay, just a moment. *Frantic typing*
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Jaybird replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
if it makes u feel any better….we’re really looking forward to it??
That does help. XD
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Jaybird replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @wilder-w
By the way, I’ve figured out that Reúven has a hardship license (because of his father’s paraplegia). Also, because his and Liora’s families know each other so well, him giving her a ride is nothing uncommon.
ALSO!!! I kinda feel the need to explain what sounds rather funny in our…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
*gasp*
I’m an eccentric mentor!?
*Starts to throw confetti*
Waaiiittttt….
*Lowers confetti*
What exactly does that mean?
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
And you do a lovely job of it too! XD
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Koshka replied to the topic So…my draft has finally started…and I'd like some thoughts so far! 😀 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Ugh! I. Despise. Hans.
That was so good! I love all the history stuff, even though, to be honest, I usually don’t research WWII often. I do love this though, and….ahhhh….
This is totally making me want to dig Promise of Zion out again. XD
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Jaybird replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter (I sense someone is on the trail. XD XD) @keilah-h @wilder-w
I had an RP half finished when my phone glitched off and it poofed away.
I’ll just have to rewrite it.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
AHHHHHH!!!! Just don’t look to closely, alright?
Hmm, I guess you could dictate out loud.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Yeah but – *shhhh!* Don’t tell her the rest!
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
She has auburn/red hair (a little more red than auburn though), and leaf green with amber and blue flecks.
Do I obsess over my character’s eyes? Maybe a little. XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Hehehe….*whispers*
“She’s figured us out!”
Yes, we definitely know each other in real life.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
XD XD XD
Aplets and Cotlets! Little candies similar to Turkish Delights, but made from apples, pears, or apricots, and assorted tree nuts. Or no nuts, it depends on the variety.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Russo-Ukrainian War Novel. Please Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
I am wondering though, Ludwika and Michał, are they just being obnoxious brother and sister, or is there conflict in this family? Because it may just be me, but they felt rather strained.
And what draft is this?
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Koshka replied to the topic Russo-Ukrainian War Novel. Please Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Wow. I like your set up. You did a very good job of an intro.
I did feel like some things were a little too stated, and perhaps not quite smooth. You did a very good job though. I enjoyed it, and will be hoping for more!
And I should probably read more contemporary fiction. It was a little bit funny on my side to be reading about cell…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Eira
The sidewalk was hard and my feet yearned for the soft dirt around the orphanage. Still, I kept up a vigorous pace. I’d be late if I didn’t hustle. My backpack kept shifting with each step, numbly jarring my back, but I had a rythum, and it worked. In a few more seconds I was within sight…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @wilder-w @koshka @godlyfantasy12
I’m on and about to RP. Sorry it’s taken a bit.
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